Gotta say I was highly amused with this, well done.
Anna.D (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Sep 2015
Awww, this is so gosh darn cute and funny! Just a perfect little jewel of a oneshot.
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Dec 2014
OMG THAT WAS SSSOOOOOO AWSOME. I Can't believe she did that and yet it's Such A Kagome thing to do. And Naraku's all like WTF!!!!!.
Jenna (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Sep 2011
So I was just staking your profile a little bit (seriously! Nothing creepy!) And I saw this story thought, "What the heck!" So very glad I did because I thoroughly enjoyed it! I have heard of this demon repelling theory before too! I think it was a brilliant idea to turn it into a story!
"But you are an idiot"
I died!! Loved it!
I love reading this. It never gets old and its just too hilarious!
Excuse me while I die (again). AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. You, Ma'am, are epic covered in awesomesauce and cheese. I love you. And now you've inspired me (again). So I's gonna go kick this plunny a little. ... damn Naraku... *grumbles*
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Congratulations, Bell; Book and... What, Now? has won third place best one-shot for the 4th Quarter 2010 at Dokuga. You can find your winner banner here: http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/13/15/2980.png Congrats again and keep up the great work!
*Falling on floor, laughing uproariously* This is one of the funniest one-shots I've ever read!!! And sexy too! Good job!
I'm still chuckling over Naraku's inability to hear. I could just imagine him leaning over with a confused look on his face and screaming, "What?" 'OMG. I've gone deaf!'
Lmao. So comical. Anyway, I loved this story. It was funny, and well thought up. :)
Kags sounds a little more than stupid in this story... LOL! But I liked it for sure!
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Dec 2010
Haha I loved it :D Good Job!!
with out a doubt i can definatly say this is the BEST STORY EVER! (no sarcasim i sware^_-)
Hehe, that was cute ^_^ I didn't notice any grammer errors. But in some of the paragraphs the sentence structure is a little clunky. You may want to go back and re-read it and maybe smooth it out a bit. You write very visually, which really makes the story stand out. I can see every pout, every evil gleam and innocent look as kagome hatched her little plan. You've piqued my interest in the movie as well (I added it to my Netflix, hehe). Thank you for putting out this fun little ficlett. Keep up the good work!
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Dec 2010
Wow. If all consequences for being an idiot were like that, I'd be the first in line to do the most incredibly stupid thing I could find.
Amber
I love it Freya!!!! It was really cute!!!! :D!!!
(laughs) Aw that was so cute and adorkable on Kagome's part! You did a really good job on putting our conversation into a one-shot, I loved it. Ecspecially the ending (laughs) I noticed a few spelling mistakes/missing words, but nothing huge. This was great, defintely a great stress reliever from the frustration of putting up Christmas decorations/decorating the tree.
I also like how you wrote the reactions from the group, made me giggle. Good job!!
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