That was an interesting story Kikyo told. I can't wait for more!
So far, I really like this story. This last chapter was great,it was longer & it was also odd,bizarre & enlightening....I can't imagine how this story is gong to go. Its different as Inu & Sango are the evil,mean friends,usually it's Inu & Kikyo.I don't understand how the instant the Jewel became complete it suddenly became tainted & then just dissappeared into thin air. I'd thought the jewel could only dissappear if it was complete , purified & then destroyed only by a certain act that freed Mikoriko from within it. Just because it dissappeared doesn't mean it has been detroyed & is now gone forever.I only know in the original story the Jewel has to be whole & purified first,as that was how it was when inside Kag's life since birth.I think in the original there was a constant war between good & evil going on for 500yrs at the time Kikyo had it burned with her body & then 500yrs later it returned because Kagome was born with it inside her.They say it can be wished on,but I'm not sure if the wish has to be a pure wish & can't be a selfish one without somehow bringing about evil. I like that your story is independent from the manga/anime as FF should be & that means what ever you write in this doesn't have be something that would only be plausible if it followed along the characters & situations from the original 'Iuyasha'.
I like that the writer of the FF is the one who develops the tale, decides who & what is allowed to be the way the writer writes the FF & the writer can change any part of the story & even change who & what the characters are & do. I liked that this story is so different that you can only guess what is going to happen next. I love that the sword's master is Kagome,it's as if it chose her (maybe cause she's pure of heart??)& that was why only she could pull it. I want her & Sessh to fall in love & I think it'd be cool if it doesn't matter who she chooses as a protector,as long as they vow to use the sword to protect her then they can weild it & it doesn't matter if the being is youkai,hanyou or human.When this being she descibed seeing all her life(the one as described as being beautiful,almost godly,like Sessh looks) when she sad,desperate, scared or such,I thought how cool would it be if Kags isn't really human,but miko/youkai or Miko/inu youkai or some rare powerful,special being,like a demi god or rare one of a kind half youkai & half goddess & if she was to mate a powerful youkai (like Sessh) she'd birth poweful full Inu youkai with the addition of her special power? I just like want her to be seen as beautful,powerful & unique & I want Sess to want/love her so strongly that his body & inner beast won't allow him to be with any other female.
If in Kikyo's Journey,she found love,a Mate & had then had no choice-she had to turn the male she loved into stone & trap/hide him in a mountainside?? It seemed like Kikyo was either telling or putting the thought in (my mind) Kagomes brain that all her incarnations have basically had a destiny,led by fate, to complete a task that was going to be hard,heartbreaking & painful.Which Kags already had happen ,so I hope this isn't a story where she has to suffer thru 5-20 or 50 chaps,or1-5 yrs to get to be loved,happy,etc.
When Kkyo asked Kagome how Kagome's body had healed already, as she had been the one who just after a day or so ago hade removed her beaten,stabbed & sliced up body off a tree that Sango had used a knife to stab & hang her body on so she & Inu could force her to watch as Sango & Inu had sex,telling Kags that they hated her & had been intentionally lieing to eveyone to use them but mainly to use & hurt Kags. They told her they'd been hiding their sexual relationship for over a year & 6 months ago Sango decided they shouldn't hide it & just take the jewel & kill Kagome or toss her in the well & seal it.
I look forward to the next chap
So awesome! violent Sess to the rescue! >:3 I really REALLY hope something nasty happens to sango and inuyasha, no nice happy endings for them, seriously difugurment, and making them total outcasts, death. >:l they are really arsehats!
That was quite the interesting tale there that Kikyo told. I was interested! I thought she was going to attack Kagome when she got there though. lol A nice twist that she actually decided to speak like a normal being. And she "died" again...Whatever. I didn't even have to wish for very long! lmmfao I wait semi-patiently for the next chapter. You know, the same patience Sesshoumaru has with Jaken, kinda patient. lmmfao
lara (Chapter 5) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
I just found this story & it is so exciting I can't wait to see what will happen next.
I hope you update soon as I have so many questions
nykita (Chapter 3) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
she bedded him? O.O
How dumb is she? Sessho would never touch Inuyasha's leftovers.
O_O They killed Naraku. Interesting twist... kikyou sounds like she soon to be dead....dead dead I mean. Glade Inuyasha wasn't able to kill shippou and Miroku. Seriously if sango sat by for that too...
Anyways I can't wait to read the next chapter and if they meet up and how it goes down. :D
:D YUS!!! SESSHOUMARU HAS MADE HIS DEBUT!!! ...Okay, let me try to go in order.
I am damn happy that InuYasha did not kill Miroku or Shippo because I would have thrown myself off of the roof. >.> Filthy half-breed touching Miroku. He will die! ....:D Sango should become a haggardly old woman and constantly die and be brought back to life in order to torture InuYasha indefinitely. ;) Tetsusaiga being a bitch to him is the icing on the cake.
^_____^ I wish to know more about Kaze and his minions. :3 YAY DESTRUCTION!
Kagome needs to get a move on and meet Sesshoumaru in all his sexy, despite the idea of him running her through (which I have to admit is hilarious to picture). And...
:D YUS!!! SESSHOUMARU HAS MADE HIS DEBUT!!! Can't wait for the update! *parties*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~~~~~~~!!!!!!
*wiggles update bribery c0okies at you like a mad woman!!!!! more!!!!*
@_@
Seriously i hope that someone puts a beating on inuyasha tot he point that he's worse off then ever before, maybe turned human, and totally weak, and sango gets turned into a prostitute. >:l *is seriously mad at them* i REALLY hope kirara chooses miro/Kagome and Shippo's side!
*Wiggles more c0okies at you*
I'm so freaking GLAD tetsaiga didnt work right for him, but i'm still pissy it worked in the first place! even thinking of kagome. it should reject him! >:l stupid hanyou, and sango! OMFG i hope someone BichSmacks her. >:l I'm so raRr right now! i need the new chapter PLEASE!!!!
you can't wait! I CANT WAIT!!!! *wiggles update briber c0okies at you* seriosuly!!!! chapter 5 please!!!! *wiggles more c0okies* your fic has given me a plunnie!!!! More please!
I set myself up for sadness thinking Miroku and Shippo were going to die. Tears in my eyes and everything! :D I'm glad they're still alive. I have never wanted Sango to shut up ever, but this time, I really wanted some form of torture for her. ;-; *waits for next chapter* Can I smack her?
Izzy (Chapter 3) - Sun 26 Dec 2010
I really like the direction this is taking pls udate soon <3
Poor Kagome. I can't wait to see what happens next. So who picked her up? Was that the lady?
Ashes (Chapter 3) - Thu 23 Dec 2010
Personally, I didn't really care for the part with Sango being all... psycho. In any case the concept so far is intriguing and your imagery is well done.
Yo.
I don't even know what to say right now. Can we take InuYasha's head and put it on our wall as a momento or something? And this is one of the few times I wanted to take Sango's head right with him! What about poor Miroku!? How dare she!? -.- InuYasha's crude language makes me want to staple his lips shut for the rest of his life. ;-; Rude. Of course, all this means you have successfully pulled the reader in and made them feel included!
Btw, I see why you told me not to kill you. You've barely made it to the next day for this one. I'll spare you for awhile longer. :D
Autumn (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Dec 2010
Poor Kagome. Update soon!
okay i seriously love this, but if tetsaiga works after this happened i'm going to be disappointed, Kagome pulled tetsaiga,a nd inuyasha betrayed her, so i hope it doenst work :[ *is upset now,* i nee dyou to UPDATE!!
VEry interesting. I curious how this will go down and >.< for Inuyasha playing with her.
InuYasha is such a dick, omg! I was trying to read before I went to sleep last night but it took me a half hour to read a sentence because I fell asleep. But I laid down and I could not go to sleep until I read the chapter so I opened my phone to do so and after reading the chapter I nearly threw my Blackberry at the wall after reading because of InuYasha's fuckery. Throwing my phone (nearly) is a good thing. ^_^ >.> I want to kill him. Though, if I found InuYasha slightly sexy at the end and not much happened...When Sesshoumaru is in the story I can tell I will be drooling all over the place. But I digress...Keep up the great work! :D Can't wait for the next update! :3
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