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I have followed this story add its prologue. I hope you continue this with Harukos mating and kikyo giving birth. This is a very well thought out story. I can't wait to read more and highly request you continue writing

I have read your Children Of Gods and I just finished reading what you have wrote up to now on the sequel. I know real life gets in the way of fanfiction but I do hope you will pick this story back up and complete it. It is just too good to be left unfinished. I am not a writer but someone who enjoys reading a great story. I couldn't stop reading until I reached the last chapter you wrote. Your character portrayal was spot on as well as the flow of the story. I hope one day when it feasible that you finish this great story because it has become one of my favorites.

Update update update I need more!!!!!!

HI , I LOVE YOUR FANFIC ''WESTERN LEGACY '' ,,,,,,,,,,,,BUT WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE IT ...............IT HAS BEEN 2 YEARS SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED IT....................PLEASE UPDATE AND FINISH YOUR FANFIC......ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND IVE READ IT SEVERAL TIMES......BUT I WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS UP REAL SOON .....................AND HOPE YOU WILL COMPLETE THE FANFIC.................................................................TDANIEL

Please update! I would love to know what happens next!

The story itself is nice and tastefully done.

There were many grammar and punctuation mistakes, however.

Nice blend of actual histories in it too for the non-history buff.

Please write more soon, can't wait to read the next chapter! I love the relationships you have going in your story.

can you update and finish the story pllleeaasseeee :)

please update really love it thanks.

HI, LOVE YOUR FANFIC................BUT I WISH YOU WOULD UPDATE AND FINISH THE STORY................PLEASE UPDATE SOON.............CANT WAIT TO SEE IT COMPLETED.,,,,,...........................TDANIEL

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

What a gem your fics are. I hope you'll continue this one.

I'm finally leaving a review after reading this story years ago, the story is great. Keep it coming.

I have read both stories now and am loving it totally!. You are a gifted writer and I can not wait for the next chapter. Sesshomeru and Kagome were written beautifully int his story. I am totally cheering Kagome on to kill that damnned bired. Though I can not see Shippo being gay I just I can see himbeing bi, being fox and all haha. The regain of Sesshomeru's beast and the fight with his son ( Such a good pup he has) was epic and sad at the same time. The whole time was kept repeating 'dont kill him dont kill him you can't! ' In my mind while I was reading. I was happy that the pup lived but I can see that this will affect Sesshomeru emotionally somehow. After all he did just maul if not almost kill his son in a fit of bloodlust. Next chapter Kagome seiges the west and he mate is on the way? I can't wait. Sorry for the rambling ^_^'

Hello,I loved you story Children of the Gods but I don't like Shippo being gay with the ranger at all. It clashes so much with Shippo's personality from the manga and anime versions. I'm sorry but I just don't want to read any of that. Otherwise its moving along well enough.

wow! It didn't occur to me this would be the beginning of the youkai extermination! I LOVE IT! Not the threat, obviously, but the storyline. It's the first time I'm reading a fic that deals with this issue. excited!

Hey! I haven't read your original story yet, but I wanted to say that I am loving this one so far! very good writing. :)

OMG!!! What is the heavenly general doing to his sister? Could this be the beginning of what his sister saw in the premonition?

Please Update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next. It is exciting so far. Thanks

OK - I have a gripe with those kami's. Why give someone a gift that they aren't suppose to use? Which kami dreamed up such a stupid rule? Was it dumb or dumber? I don't understand the reason behind it. Also, why didn't Kagome put up more of a complaint to her 'father'? If it was my child, I'd want to be knowing what they were going to do to Maeko and I'd be concerned as to what she saw that so concerned her in regards to my mate and son. Kami or not, I'd be wanting some answers. She gave in way too easy. It's like they're running her life and she has no say so of her own.

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