i hit enter too fast.. as i was saying, i love this. though I'm kinda pissy at inuyasha having the nerve to hit kagome. seriosuly, i hope bad things happen to him. i mean how does he have the right to hit kagome when SHE's done nothing wrong. they were never together for her to be whoring herself out to anyone with, it's HER life. I hope that the tablets turn for the worse for the hanyou.

:3 i love this :3

please continue please i beg of you

THE 3 CHAPTERS WERE REALLY AWESOME<3 IM SERIOUS I HOPE YOU KEEP ON GOING CAUSE THIS IS AMAZING :)

ihope you keep on qoinq<33 cause i love it ^.^

This is so cool<33 KEEP ON GOING :)

I'll say! This story is "shaping" up really well! I love the lemony goodness. ;D

Thank you for writing it!

I hope you update soon!

hahahahahaha i LOVE this! i wonder if they'll become EFbuddies~!

Let them become  more than lovers , let him mate amd marry her, please!

0.0! you stopped it there? THERE?!?!?! X^< You evil cliffy-maker, you!!! OMG!! Omg, will Sesshy actually go through with it this time or chicken out?? >:^> Kags "seems" to be all "yes-sir", but will Sesshy be satisfied will her only repaying a debt? >-< OMG I can't wait for the next upodate!

Great job, I'm on the edge of my seat, I wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work!

those last five words made me blush how awesome, cant wait for the nexrt chapter of this story lol

till next time

KAR

OMG!!! What an EVIL spot to cut off at!!! GAH!

love it

love it

OMG!!!! I hate Cliffys!!!! This wassss sooo good! cant wait until ur next update!

This story is suprisingly good. Usually I´m rather picky and only a few writers get how to portray these two without making them totally OOC. Changes are good but there needs to be a reason for the change otherwise it´s just unrealistic how suddenly everyone acts differently. I like Kagome´s portrayal the most. She is still the loveable, nice and brave girl she always has been but now she is more mature without being a Mary-Sue. Many writers let every character mature but not her which doesn´t make sense.

The same with Sesshoumaru, he didn´t decide that he loves her suddenly just because he saved her but he is attracted to her which is believable with the chemistry they have and the time they spendt together. In the manga he saved her at least two times directly without having an obligation into doing so. He is capable for being compassionate even if he is picky on whom to give compassion. A child´s love can soften everyone and through Rin he learned that he´s not doomed to care for someone no matter how seldom it is or how small the gesture is. And he does care for Rin even if he never showed it physically, his protection was enough. Hell, he even cared for Jaken no matter how annoying he can be but he is his oldest companion/retainer. It speaks volumes how he let Jaken follow him even if he left Rin in the village so she can live and grow up with her species and make a living there.

What I want to say is that you have build the Kagome/Sesshoumaru in a very believable and sexy way, you can practically feel the electricity between those two and just wait until these two devour each other. I can bet they will be addicted to each other. 

Just one mistake I´d like to point out: is raki supposed to be miko power? I think you meant reiki. Ki is the general use for power, miko-ki or reiki for blessed ones in the shinto religion (manga based), and houriki for the blessed ones who follow Buddha´s path like Miroku. I use the term blessed one because not everyone can be a monk or miko with real power. It always irked me how some writers just turn a character into a miko because they wanted to give them power (like Rin). Either you are born as a miko and monk or not. The same with how they have to be a virgin so they don´t lose their power. What bullshit. Why should spiritual power be connected to a thin membrane and not the soul who collects the gifts it receives and use it in some reincarnations until the cicle is complete? Kikyou has an "impure" body even if she´s not evil so how can she still use her powers? How come that so many "holy" families also have holy children who follow their path? Christian believes are different from the asian religions after all Miroku did not stop being a real monk after he married and had children with his wife. Sorry for my rambling. I was just annoyed about the writers who just write about things they obviously have no knowledge about and don´t even try to research a bit before spreading wrong information.

A cilffy?! Noooo! Your story is absolutely addicting! I love it! I do love the steady chemistry you have built between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Hope you update soon! :)

please please please! add the next chapter this is too big a cliff hanger, post the next one asap!

Closeness between Sess and Kad is always a plus but Kag still has a long way to go to be independent.