WORTH WAITING FORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

Oo, boy! Can't wait until we get to the totally new chapters!

the joining is supposed to keep them in the room for 2-3 days,right??? & she still has to mark him also ,right??? so does that mean that he'll be taking he again  & again as it seems if that was their mating it was quite the quickie for them...does that mean he'll be taking her over & over untill every one of her orifices is full & leaking his seed...front & back..I had thought that with him & his beast taking part in the mating/marking they be kinda rough,down & dirty even if it meant part of him filling her back while his hands & fingers worked her front & then trading places so that after 2 days of continuosly going at it.whether she was asleep or awake, her body inside & out would be covered & filled with his seed & scent....I look forward to the next chapter

I have to say this because it really bothers me.... I find makes me so angry that Sessh hasn't/isn't punishing,replacing or demoting Jaken for acting as if he is not just a servant but an equal of Sessh's...I feel that by him refusing to train Kagome in the way of youkai politics or refusing anything requested of him by Sessh ,Sessh is his Lord & Master & Jaken is nothing but a lowly servant that treats Rin,Sessh's ward with disrespect,he's weak & afraid of his own shadow, he treats Rin awfully & by denying any request by Sessh I feel that he is trying to blatantly show disrespect & dishonor to both Sessh & Kagome & if Sessh really feels as strongly for Kagome as he behaves then I do not understand why he has yet to punish,demote or replace Jaken till he remembers that he is nothing but a servant. Usually when Jaken speaks like an idiot in front of others or just in front of Rin Sessh is always quick to put him in his place & remind him of the fact that he nothing but a lowly toad youkai with no strength or powers of his own & the only power he weilds is the staff of 2 heads which is not Jakens but Sessh's weapon & it was only given to Jaken so when Sessh is not with him he can defend himself & if he's alone with Ah un  &  Rin he can be of some assistance to Ah Un in the protection of Rin...I can't help but feel that for Jakens actions regarding Kagome...Sessh should take the staff of 2 heads away from him & tell Jaken that he (Sessh) has obviously made a mistake in giving him the staff & taking him with him when he leaves the castle as it appears  that Jaken now thinks he has choices & options he's never earned ...by allowing to keep the staff Jaken seems to have held it for so long that he's forgotten that even as though he's youkai he's the of the lowest class youkai with no powers of his own or way to defend himself & that Jaken appears to have forgotten the fact that if Sessh chose to toss him out of the palace,he'd be dead in a matter of days & that by acting as if he (Jaken)  were better  than Kagome & for openly dishonoring her & in dishonoring Kagome he has also dishonored Sessh so for now he'll be taking back the staff of 2 heads, Jaken will be staying either in one of the stalls with the animals or sleeping on the floor in a bare room with youkai that are as low in station as Jaken or lower  & as Jaken will no longer be staying or working along the Royal family anymore till he learns,remembers or accepts his place....& only after he shows his betters & proves he can be trusten again , he also will no longer need to be dressed as a higher ranking servant & will be given clothing that will represent what ever the servants above him deem reasonable,,, he should also tell Jaken that this will be the last chance he will be given & if he ever disrespects Sessh,his Mate or his pups  then Sessh will either have him moved to the dungeon,killed or thrown out of the palace & marked permanently as a being who is not to be trusted. 

One word: AWESOME!

FINALLY!

Humph. Tease indeed. -_-

Anyway, I'm absolute loving this revised version! I read the original over on the Spark archive, and was fairly put out when I got to the end and there was nothing else to read, so I'm glad you decided to edit and post it here. You're a very good writer, and I definitely enjoy the way your characters develop as you go along.

Great job!

~Aubrey

p.s. - I can't remember whether it was "Legacy" or "The Twelfth Concubine", but you reviewed a story of mine recently, so thanks for that! I appreciate your support!

Silly 'Yasha. 

Cant wait for the next chapter, I really LOVE this story.

yes very happy by your update but now extremely eager ...almost painfully so to have you update the story again....I can't believe I didn't see it yesterday..I kept checking as I do several times a day

LOL, Inuyasha is such a numbskull. Awesome chapter! keep at it!

WELL- PLAYED!

I'm loving this story! Please update soon!!!

wait.. What? Oh no O.o

Well I will admit that I would love to hear Kikyo admit she's never had an orgasm with Inuyasha because it's always over so fast & although she wants to try to have pups she was hoping if the girls didn't mind if they had any ideas how to make it so he could last longer than a couple minutes & that way Kagome & Sango could say well with foreplay it should take more than a few minutes & then Kikyo would admit that Inu doesn't know what that is but she's going to try to teach him & see if that'll get him to slow down...& I was thinking how funny if would be if Kikyo admitted that she's afraid that sex with Inu will never be exciting,enjoyable,something to look forward to or satisfying & then Kagome & Sango could tell her to try to get him slow down & make it more enjoyable by learning how to pleasure each other before sex & then have sex.(I can't stand Kikyo & Inuyasha so the thought that he sucks in bed & Kikyo would admit would be the best...I know if I was Kagome & about to Mate a hottie like Sessh who was killer in bed then to hear from Kikyo  that Inu sucked..if I was Kagome & had been treated like crap by Inu all that time ...I'd feel a little sorry for Kikyo for having to spend her life with someone like that ,grateful he didn't choose me & grinning like the Cheschire cat inside thinking how I'd be able to keep a straight face whenever I looked at Inu again & I'd be very excited to tell Sessh about that).

Now it just figures that Inu the ass is probably trying to ruin her relationship with Sessh & she's got to go out & break up a fight with the outfit that Sessh isn't supposed to see till they're alone later. I really hope Kagome kicks Inu's ass & tells him she never wants to see him again cause if him & Sessh are having an intense fight it has to be Inu's fault cause he's a selfish ass & if he had any respect for her as a friend & the person who gave his Mate life so he could be happy & allow her to find her own happiness then he's an ungrateful ass who she never wants to see ever again & tells him she'll never forgive him for this since he already knows that Kagome loves Sessh  & even if Inu thinks she's wrong he has no right to say anything & if he really cared he be there as a friend to help her later on if it was a mistake since he'd already given his opinion & Kagome told him it had nothing to do with him,makes him leave & hopefully Sessh isn't angry at her & after hearing her tirade at Inu & seeing what she's wearing figures it out & they can take their time celebrating alone together & then see her family,look up info in the future,look for her ancestors & go from there .....

But for now please update soon so we know what happens.......I'm dying to know..what is going on & what's going to happen & then......

Oh yeah I also hope if Kagome & Inu fight which I believe will happen because I'm sure whatever is going on with this fight between Inu & Sessh is his fault....selfish ass......as I was saying is  after Kagome & he fights I hope his sword,that he got only because  Kagome pulled it or he'd never even have it,..I hope the sword doesn't transform anymore for him but he still has to carry it to contain his demon blood even though that's all it'll be good for ..(even if his dads spirit has to tell him ....it won't work till you realize you're selfish & ungrateful & reminds him that the one who pulled the sword,gifted it to you, gave you back a chance with the female you love,which is something no being would ever have done & untill he realizes he was gifted with a true friend who only ever cared for you & your happiness,risked her own life to save yours many times & all you did was treat this person with cruelty & dishonorably..then a worthless sword is more than what you deserve).......unless he ever learns his lesson on how to treat people right & be grateful,,,,,& eventually earn Kagome (& Sessh) to forgiveness

That's  one thing I have to admit that saddens me is that by Kagome being a hanyou (unless mating Sessh could change that & make her full youkai) she'll always have to worry about losing control to her youkai blood like when she hurt Miroku & she'll never be able to transform into a beast or true youkai form & she'll always have to worry about the day her youkai blood takes over & she dies,hurts someone she loves or has to be killed.....never knowing & always worrying about how long she has,if she'll see her pups grow up or how long she'll have with her Mate, her only love..........if I was her I'd feel like a ticking time bomb...I mean Inu knows he may live longer than most hanyou's since his dad was a tai youkai but then again his father's youkai blood vs. his mothers powerless human blood could mean he has less time,he's already almost completely lost it a few times if he didn't have the sword....his father powerful youkai could overcome his human blood sooner than later

that's why I feel sad about Kagome being hanyou

LOVELY, MORE EXCELLLENT WORK,KEEP IT UP!

YOU GO BOY!GO GET YOUR GIRL!

XD.....I got this goofy grin on my face.....XP   I love the fact that Sesshomaru knows the language of flowers....I only wish I knew but there are literaly thousands of flowers how long would it take to remember the meanings of all of them?  So Kagome is going to show up in her Sessy suduction suit in the next chapter right?  and when I say Sessy suduction suit I mean the kimono that she had commisioned....that will be and nice treat for the Tai Youki....XD....Untill next time....Nyuka

that was really sweet & I can't believe how floored they all were...I guess after having Kagome gone one day & an entire night  & then she returns & the first thing she does is give him a kiss & then while he was talking to everyone with his serious stoic face on, she had an urge to feel him up & squeezed his ass rather intensely while raking her fingers down his back & it caused him to bark out loud at everyone in the middle of his speech,which of course aggravated him that she could make him lose control so easy & he decided to punish her for her actions since she wanted to play he decided to play with her by using an obi & tying her hands behind her back & then tying another one around her head while wrapping it so it was in her mouth so she couldn't speak only moan & he then began to torture her with pleasure while also pleasuring her as torture by not letting her have an orgasm..then he realized while he was enjoying having this control over her he was also causing himself pain so he removed the tie he was using as a gag & then using her mouth to relieve some of his pressure & then he went back to teasing her body but still refusing to give her what she wanted...he became determined to make her beg for it & when she realized what he was doing so she figured if she wasn't getting  what she wanted then neither would he & she closed her legs wrapping her ankles together & he came to the conclusion he may have taken it to far & as an act of kindness on his end he decided to untie her hands & I loved how you put he realized that was a mistake when she suddenly jumped up & attacked him by grabbing his ---- & pulling him over to the bed & then throwing him on his back & before he could react she said if you won't give it to me I'll take it then she did....... I thought that was great & then of course she left him alone all night again so Shippo would feel comfortable his first night in his new home....poor Sessh had to spend his 2nd night alone in a row & this time he knew she was just a few doors away....

so today she got flowers but I wonder what Jaken the ass called him away...I really dislike Jaken & now that he wouldn't teach her something that would be beneficial for Sessh if she knew...I hope Sessh demotes him because he deserves to spend the time while Kagome is being taught what he refused to teach her after His Lord & Master requested him to & even asked him nicely & he denied...I would think that a servant telling his Lord  that he refuses to teach his Lord's intended Mate whom his Lord loves & openly disrespecting her when she treats this same servant with respect while the servant treats her like less than a servant,I would think that Jaken's refusal & the fact that Jaken refuses to show Kagome the respect she deserves is the same as showing disrespect for Sessh so while Kagome is being taught by someone else then I think as punishment Jaken should be sweeping shit out of horse & dragon stalls & other extremely demeaning jobs until he remembers he is only a servant & does not get to pick & choose the chores he is assigned or asked to do & I hope once he introduces the being or beings that are willing to train/teach Kagome what she'll need to know he also starts interviewing for someone to replace Jaken that is more trustworthy to look over Rin when they leave the palace & can protect her better....I mean Jaken is useless & talks down to Sessh's ward & now that Jaken has already shown Sessh what he thinks of Kagome ....& she will be his Mate soon, then  I think it's time to find someone better suited & more respectful to look after his ward,adopted kit & Mate & eventually pup or pups....besides a being such as Sessh having a retainer that's a lowly toad is actually below him,it's one thing to have Jaken look after Ah-Un....but he obviously has been treating Jaken to well & now Jaken seems to think of himself as an equal of sorts & a being who is better than his ward & his mate to be.......I think the staff of 2 heads would be better off in someone elses hands

Now I can't wait for Kagome to get the dress &.......

NEXT CHAPTERS PLEASE !!!!!PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE !!!!

I'm so grateful that you updated...& I loved that she did that to Sessh when she broke his concentration while he was speaking...hehehe...I was thinking that since she is Kitsune & they are very intelligent,quick witted,fast learners, known for their illusions,fox majic & known for being generally mischevious beings(Shippo's tribe were known for all those things along with fox fire & Kagome seems to be a combo Kitsune with the same abilities as Shippo & his foxfire,she also has the ability to produce poison,healing saliva,plus whatever she learns from her ancestors & she still has her Miko powers)so it was only a matter of time before she did something what she did & I loved her punishment...I think she enjoyed her punishment so much that she loved it & the point he was trying to make by torturing her with pleasure or pleasuring her with torture, I wonder if he realized that she may have enjoyed it too much & that she'll probably be trying to come up with more things to do to him that will make him punish her. That part was great, I was nervous when you left off with him angry at her & getting ready to punish her......who knew it was going to be such an intense & enjoyable punishment??

Oh yeah, now that she's back...she was gone one night & this night she's back at the castle sleeping with Shippo makes a 2nd night so the 2 days that he needed to make the dress she asked to have made to wear for Sessh so that he'd know her answer should be ready...so soon after they wake up it should be brought to her...I'm excited...since her giving him her response isn't a public thing, I wonder how or when she'll do it.....He should understand when he sees her in a kimono similar to his own, with his house's colors & patterns,that she is wearing it to give him her answer that she wants to be his Mate,right??? When she asked for the kimono to be made the tailor said that only his Mate would be allowed to wear what she described so when he sees her wearing it his understanding should be automatic from what the tailor implied & she left the tailor & went to see Chika the healer, whom is also a seer, when Kagome was talking to her about her,Chika gave her a short exam where Kagome could feel her within her mind,body & aura & Chiko was in awe for a bit but after they sat & spoke of Kagome's new powers ,old powers & her connection to the Jewel even telling Kagome that she's still connected to the Jewel,they spoke about quite a bit & Chika mentioned she & Sessh would be able to locate her living ancestors but she's have to be careful what she discussed with them & such, Chika even referred to her as Sessh's Mate & told her outright that she knew it was to be & told her what abilities she needed training on & with whom & she mentioned that there was more Kagome would learn about her abilities soon enough. I know when she wakes up Sessh said they would sit & discuss what Chika told her & I'm looking forward to them discussing what Chika said & I wonder if Sessh also spoke to Chika himself after Kagome met with her. I loved that when Kagome left Chika ...Chika was thinking about all she learned of Kagome & said something similar to 'now I know why Sessh has never found a Mate before...his soul was waiting for her' or it's other half or something to the effect that Kagome would be the only one for Sessh & that could complete him or...I don't know I'll have to go back & read but I can't help but wonder if Sessh saw her after or if Chika asked to see him after...I do hope that they see her together to find out what they should or shouldn't discuss with Kagome's living ancestors when they see them. I also can't help but wonder about Kagome taking Sessh to meet her family,I know she left a note for her mom when she was there last but I was wondering if her grandpa knew anything about her dad....just because her mom didn't know doesn't mean grandpa doesn't know anything...I don't even know if grandpa is related to her mom or dad...grandpa could be youkai too for all I know....since her dad was youkai(over 220 yrs old) & hid it from her mom (& had foxfire abilities & became a fireman) which is odd because he had to know that their children would be hanyou & would eventually change & develop powers ...how could he have not left info to help his kids in case he wasn't there to help them,someone to contact,something they have yet to find or someone family or friendly looking or waiting...I can only imagine that he must have been very powerful & known some very powerful spells,illusions & magic to hide his true appearance,his youkai & any visible signs on the kids since birth...its odd because even with spells you can't change blood......there had & has to be other youkai who knew or were related to him in the future & there has to be at least more info about him near her home in the future, did he know about the power of the well or that Kagome had the Jewel within her at birth..as a youkai wouldn't he have felt the Jewel within Kagome??? what was that memory she had of him??? did he have relatives,siblings....did he really die??? I would love to know what her Dad really looked like. why was he hiding himself & was it just for the humans???

I can't wait for more I'm going to scream....MORE,MORE,MORE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh evil being that you are,... you left an AN stating that there will be changes & since I don't recall the part from the original version of the story that you'll be changing I'm not sure if I'll have to give in & finally look on Spark & read the unedited (1st) story .........or should I just go with the flow of this version & read the one on Spark some other time...???...I just don't know, I don't remember this part of the original & I've been so into this story & enjoying it so very much & so looking forward to what'll happen next that I've forgotten there is an old version....then when I think about it, if the old one was never finished, then maybe I should just forget the old one & enjoy this one...what do you think...??????  

This is my first time through (although I want to sneak and read the old version b/c I'm too impatient for you to update), but I shall wait b/c this version is a lot different then the other. Alot  more depth and development. Almost like two different stories. Keep up the great job can't wait for more.