I really like this fic. The ending was very sweet. :)
I really liked this & would love to see more. If he doesn't know by now that she is from the future then
When he 1st found her the 1st thing he noticed:
Nowhere near her, was her famous yellow bag, made in a material he had never seen in his lifetime
Then one of the next thoughts he had about her was:
This girl, although she had not been properly educated on obedience, had a way of making the Taiyoukai live through emotions, he, himself, never thought possible
Then with that-
As their body connected for the first time, Kagome took as big gulp of air and hissed. Stopping in his movement, he looked down at the woman beneath him, eyes recovering their normal color. “You, could have said something about this, nigen.” He said. Even to him, his voice sounded softer. Hovering his hand over her face, he brushed away a lock of hair that was on her forehead. “Are you alright, miko?” he asked, without realizing he meant it. He felt the woman beneath him take a huge breath before she nodded her head, eyes meeting hers, he saw something there he hadn’t seen in ages; Trust
& then what he said to her at the spring before her friends showed up would make me think he might want to see her again & that would be really cool if you kept doing stories that kept up from this meeting with him.I like how she was upset & wished she was far away & the Kami's teleported her into Sessh's path.
lara (Chapter 3) - Mon 11 Apr 2011
This was great I only wish there was more.
i loved this!! nice work Tenchi!!
karrina (Chapter 3) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
I loved your art !! lmao keep writing your awesome at it !
~Ash~ (Chapter 2) - Tue 02 Mar 2010
I loved it Vickykins! You have a great talent for writing stories. I cant wait to read the next chapter. Ilyyyyyy *blows a kiss*
Hey girl I'm love'n it so far and can't wait to see what your smut bunny comes up with. well i'll be waiting to hear from you soon. hugs and puppies
tina (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Jun 2008
sweeet I like this story starts I look forward to future updates
So far, so good! You're doing an excellent job!
(Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Jun 2008
Nice!!!!!!
I'm liking it, hope you continue to write..
I'm dying to know what's going to happen
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