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Thanks for updating again another good chapter i look forward again to another update from this story Danyealle-sama ^^

Sesshomaru and I Headalphafemale just read your story and enjoyed it alot. Please continue with it. We are anxious to see what your Sesshomaru charater is going to do with this situation. Also what will Inuyasha say and do or will Kagome handle it all in the end? We like it that Kagome doesn't take no crap.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMG THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!! I'm still dying, srsly *rolls then cheers* GO KAGS YOU BEAT HIM WITH THAT STICK!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Srsly woman, great job! lol

nomnomnom =x i love his inner puppy! snickering and all!

Thats it, I think I died laughing. *checks pulse* nope... so... you need to update! Oh please do!! This is GREAT!!! *cackles* X^D His beast LICKED her!!! ROFLMAO, OMG!!! Awesome, I can't wait to see what else you make him do to her!! *rubs hands together* Or what you make HER do to HIM as "revenge" >:^). X^D Oh I can't wait!! Please hurry your awesome!

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silly puppy!

thats just rather awesome!

More please!

finally! okay seriously i think at some point i didnt get the alerts for any of it! so that beign said, i'm just now reading it, i was really wondering when you were going to post it too!

"... basically an unpleasant asshole no one could stand and wouldn't piss on if he were on fire..."

xD

That made me crack up laughing. I love this story already!

Please keep going! I can't wait to read the rest!

hmmm...i dont remember kagome being so loudmouthed in the anime/manga. On the contrary. Is she OOC?

How come sess had such a hard time capturing her? He has speed, strenght and even a powerful aura that could render her helpless. Weird.

Otherwise interesting.

Oh my God! How funny was that. The line "what had gone wrong in her life that she had been thrust into a situation where she had to make a rule that stated, clearly, licking wasn’t allowed" was priceless. I can't wait for the next update. Sesshomaru's beast actually seems very funny and not as stuck up he should let him out sometimes. ^_^

I like the story but I don't get it. Your Sessh is very off & occ in a way that I don't understand. Kag is being her usual careful but caring way, trying to take care of his immediate life threatening injuries while taking into consideration his unstable personality along with his threatening attitude,even backing off so that he could take in what happened & that he is the one in danger of death & she's only trying to help keep him alive.............What I don't understand is that with Sessh being as intelligent, suspicious & observant as he is.... I find it difficult that he would be unaware of-

1- the fact that the 2 of them are now in a desperate situation that he caused

2- even with his intelligence,awareness & sense of honor, I understand he would be both confused & shocked by the obvious fact that Kagome, even though he's done nothing but be cruel & try to kill her, she has done nothing but tried to care for him,save his life & treat the injuries he sustained & that if she hadn't the injuries would have killed him .

3-the fact that she also didn't & hasn't blamed him or taken advantage of him in some way while he was unconscious & unable to defend himself under the situation,she instead used that opportunity to try care for the worst of his wounds while he was unconscious & unable to feel the pain,she also didn't tell Inuyasha the truth of how they got in this situation & instead she only said that there was an earthquake that led to the cave in,that there would be very bad aftershocks soon & then, making it appear as an afterthought, she mentioned that Sessh showed up & was then trapped down there with her .

4- the fact that she never once mentioning that Sessh showed up in order to take advantage of her being alone,threatened her with physical violence, tried to kidnap her so he could use her to get the sword from Inu & that since the cave in he's done nothing but threatnen her life,treat her like crap & ignore her.

What I don't get is that now that he's had time to sit,rest,think & reconsider the situation, even though he's still curious & distrustful, by now it is blatantly obvious that she could have & by his standards should have, done nothing & left him to die (which is what he'd of done if she was the one hurt,bleeding to death & he was not),being the honorable being he is why hasn't he started to realize, think about & absorb what she's done for him,how she's treated him,stopped him from bleeding out,the fact that she saved him, helped him,cared for & fed him trying to increase his strength & help him heal.For a being such as him,who can SENSE A LIE,SEE an AURA,SENSE her POTENTIAL POWER ....instead of continuing to distrust, accuse & assume the worst ....it would be impossible with his senses that he's not aware of the odd things & ways about her...

He must have a hundred questions about her. How can someone as curious as he not take the opportunity to ask her any of them,when his mind has to be spinning with questions about her & how different she is from every other human ??? why hasn't he asked her...why she saved him after he has tried to kill her??? why she didn't tell Inuyasha the real reason he was here when the cave-in happened??? why she is pure(or her purity so bright) or asked her about her potential power WHICH he can obviously see is stronger than any other Miko alive & why she's untrained??? why she travels with Inuyasha??? why she dresses funny??? How she was able to pull their fathers fang in the tomb??? Why she doesn't smell so strongly of death,dirt,decay,disease & etc as other humans???

I just got into this story and am really interested in the way that it's going. I love the internal war going on with Sesshomaru. BTW the licking was ingenious. lol. Anywho, I look forward to your next chapter.

Yours,

Tiff

There are certain things that were not included in the Inuyasha series, such as the idea of a certain icy dog demon licking a certain miko... this is something that definitely should have been included. I love how mischievous the beast side is. Too funny! Can't wait for more!

Hehehe That was so cute. He can lick me anyday. Thanks for update

LOL! That was one of the funniest things I have ever read!

I kept picturing Sesshomaru's beast as one of those little devils from the old cartoons, smirking with an evil and devious look!

"Trying not to snicker evilly" (Here I could almost picture him rubbing his hands with glee while plotting his next

move!) ...

"Sesshomaru pondered beating his head on the wall to render himself unconscious and rid himself of the vision his beast was taking a great deal of pleasure in replaying." I busted laughing at this because it reminded me of an episode of The Sipmsons where Homer says: "-Shut up brain, or I'll stab you with a Q-tip!-" Poor Sesshy! I bet he is thinking along the same lines!

Then when Kagome said: “Fine, whatever! You stay where you are and I’ll stay here. And NO LICKING!” I just couldn't help but think of "The Emperor's New Groove" -One of my favorite movies!- when Cuzco says: "-And No Touchie!-" *Snikers* This was just too funny! It just got me in such a great mood to begin the week! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!

Moving on... I hope this little review will be at least a little appetaizer for your plot bunnies, that way you can get some sleep.

If that fails, just go to this page: http://kids.niehs.nih.gov/midi/rockabye.mid

And while listening to the music, pretend that I am singing:

"- Rock-a-bye, writer, on the keyboard.

Thinking of plots, to make us go LOL!.

Squeezing some lemons, all juicy and hot.

Torturing Sesshy, will make him go nuts! -"

Sweet Dreams!

Oh! and update soon! -LG

Oh my goodness... I giggled all the way through this one. XD

Normally I am not much for the separate Beast theory, but you make it work hilariously.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA that was EPIC!!! And what's wrong with her?? pfffft No Licking indeed *snorts* maybe she should've hit her head... it might have helped LOL. Anywho that was awesome and I so can't wait to see what happened next! <3333

Omg Sessho's beast is a hentai! Hahahahaha! He licked her! :x NO LICKY! Bahahahahahahaha! Holy crap Dani, that was the finniest chapter I have seen in ages. XD Loved it!

Danyealle-sama,

Thanks for updating between this and the other one you have on AFF a Debt to Be Paid. This chapter again really came out

Keep ti up get rest and be sure to keep me and other posted on Dokuga or your DA page ASAP.

Bring on more the suspense is more than I can bear sometimes. Please do update again nicely done and well laid out.

Danyealle-sama,

This story is looking quite interesting, I also reviewed this on your AFF account as well. Whichever site you do update first please update this fiction ASAP. Looking good bring on more to come ASAP.

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Thanks for updating again another good chapter i look forward again to another update from this story Danyealle-sama ^^