Wonderful story! I ended up staying up till like 4 am to finish reading it XD I didnt wanna stop. (:
I love your stories. I re-read them often. Because of that, I may have already teased you about this typo, so please forgive me if I did. And don't take offense: I'm a retired editor and can't help seeing typos and such in everything!
okay, so, what's wrong with this sentence?
"Sitting on the sill in her room, Kagome rested her head on her folded arms that were propped on her knees and shit her eyes, feeling..."
hah! Many thanks for your wonderful work.
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Suka25 (Chapter 7) - Sun 16 Jul 2017
Your description of 'Cutting' is very acurate. I, myself, had that problem when i was younger. It is like a drug but having family and friends that care for you is a big help. Of course if you have a mother like mine it helps to. She would strip me down -at 18 years old- to make sure there were no new cuts. She also took everything out of my room but as i told her later, all the sharp objects she took from me wasnt the one thing i used to cut. What i used was a tiny piece of a broken hand mirror i had hidden in the lip of the window.
If you have someone that may, think of the oddest thing they may use and take that away because like me it could be nothing more then a broken peice of mirror.
And even at 30, i still feel the need but i have other ways of dealing with my emotions. Writing has been the biggest help.
~*Dragon*~
So good!!!!!
marisel (Chapter 21) - Fri 27 May 2016
Really nice story, very detailedand props for using a common desease for these days and age. I really enjoy this one. Thanks.
this was a very good story and i liked it. i like the way sesshoumaru comes around at the end of each story you create. kagome is endearing as always. i like the strength and fortitude you put into her character to endure the troubles that come her way and the answers she comes up with to handle them. the lemons are subduded in a way that makes my imagination come to life. sometimes grafic doesnt always work when including a lemon scene and thats ok. the kissing scenes make up for that. keep writing and i'll keep reading your work. c'ya'
Nicole (Chapter 11) - Fri 24 Jul 2015
I love reading this chapter every time I read this story. It gives me such happy sighs :)
Ah that was so cute.
loved this story so much! The concept of the phoenix was really interesting and ties the story together really well. Awesome job!
Awesome. Only thing is that I wish Kikyo's death was not done so quickly. I am a bit bloodthirsty at the moment ..
Nice story...
I wish to thank you on bringing attention to the problems with dpression. While i know that most of this had to do with bullying and emotional abuse, depression and mental illness is also a big problem that many do not understand. I have Bipolar and Agoraphobia. Cutting and other harmful "coping" techniques are very tempting. While I have been able to avoid them, I know others who have not, and I have seen people lose their live to them. Thank you for bringing these delicate and important subject to light in such and compasionate and insightful manner
Its a beautiful writen stroy, from the begining to the end. I hope you continue writting stories like this one, I REALLY liked it. Even more how Kagome and Sesshoumaru came together. I also liked the pairings you made its not one you see every day.
that was perfect. i think i may have read this one time b4 i became a member or i dremaed i read it becuase i could guess that part about inuyasha and ayame being together but that might jsut be something people think about alot. the story was amazing. it's 5 am and i started it at liek midnight or one am i couldnt' stop reading it. thanks!
Sesshomaru and Kagome sitting in a tree... LOL... He is so sweet with her
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