Hi!
I've actually read two of your stories- Lord Sho'mamoo and Fallen Angel and I really like your works. I think the only thing that could be adjusted in your stories is the long descriptions between action scenes. At times I don't think it benefits the story to include the thoughts and opinions of all of the characters; though, it certainly helps the author while writing. Again, I really do like the ideas you've sewn into stories. This one is the first one I came across on dokuga; but, Lord Shomamoo is one of my favorites!
Again, another one of my absolute favorite fanfics. :) It has one of the hottest lemon scenes, ever. Two thumbs way up for making Sess a stripper.
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