Please more update update update....

please update soon i really would like to know what is going to happen it is a really good story

Please update soon. I like this story so far. Thanks for a great story.

*nearly falls off chair* NOOOOO!!!! you CAN'T end the CHAP THERE!!!!! not THERE of all places!! oh PLEASE update!! please oh please oh please oh please!!

HELP HER TO KEEP THEIR BABY! AND HELP HIM ACKNOWLEDGR HER AS WELL!

YAY FOR UPDATES!!! *bites nails* I REALLY hope Kags does NOT die though... and Sess cfomes to his senses and up holds his and her honor by taking her as his mate or something... after all.. she IS the mother of his first born...

more updates please?

omg i love this story please continue!

 and the continuation T.T

the only thing I did not like I spend time between the first and second chapter XD, PLEASE Continual

Your story is very ineteresting. However, there are many grammatical mistakes, including misspelled words and punctuation.

You may want to work on your puntuation (commas, periods, etc), becuase it will help you with run-on sentences.

Regardless, your story was really interesting, and I look forward to your update. I know that this fanfiction is NOT an english paper, but I think for the readers, it'll be much easier if you worked on your grammar a bit. (It's not major...)

If you could improve on that, I believe there will be confluence/flow in your writing.

Good job on your first fanfic! I truly enjoyed reading the heart-wrenching scene of Kagome being a single, young mother.

=)

please continue this very good (I can not correct the spelling, but the wording is good)

i like it its good cant wait for the next chapter

i love this story so far i cant wait for the next chaper