Reviews for Claimed by brittany

SnowyNight22 (Chapter 10) - Sun 21 Jul 2013

update.....update now. I love. it.


Anna (Chapter 10) - Tue 08 Mar 2011

I'm really loving the story so far so I hope you keep on updating and developing your writing. I've noticed that sometimes you use the wrong word for some situatation such as 'waist-the part of body', instead of 'waste-you're wasting my time'.

Otherwise it all makes sense and is very much an enjoyable piece of work :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

0o0o0o0o0o0o yEy Sess but you shouldnt break her!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 8) - Wed 02 Mar 2011

o.o wow this could be problematic if she's staying in this era all the time, what about school? i wonder what kagome's going to do when she HAS to go home b/c she hasnt b/c she's been stuck baby sitting. Sesshomaru cant tell her she can't, not only is it a family obligation, but her mother would get in trouble too if she didnt go, i see this as a fireworks thing. i wonder if sess goes to her time, what he;ll think of it.


snowbird (Chapter 5) - Sat 26 Feb 2011

I agree with Sesshoumaru's assessment of Kagome's clothing for that time period.  Sure she's a modern woman but not of that time so she should not feel so smug.  She's not in her time and so should dress more modestly.  Besides, who wears an expensive school uniform while gallivanting about in the woods and doing battle?  The uniform gets damaged, her bare legs get scratched by bushes and brambles, and last but not least, her panties are constantly on display.  Even while being carried on Inuyasha's back, her short skirt is flopping up and down showing everything underneath.  No wonder Miroku is constantly groping Sango with Kagome constantly flashing her painties at him.  I never  understood why the writers of the anime dressed her the way they did. 

haha.  While he was busy having fun getting her angry, she did not stop to think about who undressed her to put her in his hoari.  They saw her completely naked.


Luna_Spellsprite (Chapter 4) - Thu 24 Feb 2011

lmfao!!!


Luna_Spellsprite (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Feb 2011

Oh keep going! I have a feeling I'm gonna be laughing my tail off at this story!


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