I just found this story and I love it! I really hope you continue it because I can't wait to see what happens next!
Lol the way he treats her even though this is suppose to be serious is just so in tune with his character, as usual everyone on earth is a bother that Sesshoumaru has to deal with. I think this is my most favoured portrayal of him thus far :)
Lady you sure know how to make a person really feel, deeply, my emotions are all over the place reading this story.
Yes! Stern and honouring Sesshoumaru is awesome and saves the day and he also makes me happy! Team Sesshoumaru for the win:) Your story has me undergoing so much emotion its crazy
I cried reading this and part of me doesn't want to continue reading this but I'm hoping you're going to make it all better as per usual please! :( On bright side if any it was very well written and sadly I could clearly visualize the scene, testament to your skills
so where's the rest?!
Very true to emotions! Your quite the manipulator you know -sigh- in a strange twisted way I like your story and I hope you may write some more. Domo Arigato
Nana (Chapter 4) - Mon 21 Nov 2011
I would have cussed him out with every word I know from the book. I would then hav eaten as he said and trained my powers and the find a way to kick his a**,
this was a good update! i like how your not just having her easily get over it, though thoughts of a darker possiblity did kidna make my eyes swim with tears, still i loved this and look forward to more!
You really need to update this fic more! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
amy (Chapter 4) - Thu 03 Nov 2011
Thank you for making her face her fears and stand up for herself!
Memori (Chapter 3) - Wed 26 Oct 2011
I would like to say that while I'm not new to fanfiction I'm somewhat new to Dokuga and came across your story and, while chapter one nearly had me in tears, it is one of the best that I've read so far of the Sess/Kag pairing. I would really enjoy finishing this if you ever do. Keep up the good work and keep writing! :)
rss (Chapter 3) - Mon 18 Jul 2011
poor kagome...
i can't wait to see how u proceed with the story,
how she overcomes.
plz do update soon. :)
Meara (Chapter 3) - Mon 02 May 2011
Damnit woman, you had me tearing up a storm! I'm just glad I had the tissues nearby, ;-) You're so good at capturing emotion and writing it out so that we, as the readers, feel it. :applauds: You are wonderful!
Soubi_Shoukyaku (Chapter 3) - Mon 02 May 2011
Wow this fic is pretty good from what I've read so far. =D I was actually moved to tears at a couple parts especially when Kagome is trying to cope with what had happened to her. Keep up the good work, Please update soon I want to know that she recovers and can get over what's happened to her. Thanks again for posting your story.
~Soubi_Shoukyaku
amy (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 May 2011
Wonderful chapter, I love your writing style, more updates please!
Nilee1 (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 May 2011
You are doing and excellent job. Please continue.
kathryn (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 May 2011
very good story would like to read more
I think you're doing a wonderful job so far with this story and I'm glad you aren't rushing through everything. Healing takes time, mentally more so than physically. I agree with the way you're portraying Sesshoumaru. There's a lot more to his character than what was portrayed in the anime. I also have to say that I'm enjoying the new role for Rin. I think I will miss Jaken since he was always there in the background. I'm surprised that Sesshoumaru did not at least feel some regret or sadness at his passing since he'd been his retainer for so many years. He was irritating but always dependable and loyal.
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