Yay, finally... an update!
It's great to see how Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship is progressing; I hope you'll update your fic soon!
Jay_chAn (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jun 2011
Awesome!Just read all the chapters and I fell in love with your story!
Hope you update soon =]
I thought this chapter was wonderful. I love the you broke up the story into two pieces which made it seem like two chapters for one, yay! I think you have caught the essence of Sesshoumaru, Kagome and Inuyasha so very well. When they speak to each other it is so believable, their actions and reactions are just spot on. I love this story and I hope your muse graces you with many many more chapters.
Ceysna (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
I love this story!!!! Very cute, I love the whole havening lunch together idea. I love it. I can not wait for the next update! Keep up the great work.
jojo661538 (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
another great chapter keep up the great work ^_^
ParadiseKiss (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
Awwww this is sooo cute :3 waiting for the next chapter! :)
Avadrea (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
heheh I didnt read this at first cuase I didnt think I would like the zoo theme. But I was so wroung. THis is wounderful!
Well written, intriguing, funny, and cute. Love it. Keep writing!
KT (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
Ha ha!!! Thanks for the update!!! This was almost like the "sesshoumaru shows his power and status over all youkai" scene, and Kagome's reaction was hillarious.
They were all giving presents ha ha lol
Hope you update soon! =) Can't wait for the next chapter.
KT (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Apr 2011
This story is great! I love the storyline, character portrayal... and I can't wait to find out how they handle ah un and the dragon's relationship with sesshoumaru. I can't wait.
Please update often! =)
ParadiseKiss (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Apr 2011
I love it! XD I hopu ull add another chapter soon ;P
Why are the demons in the exhabits? Because I don't see a zoo animal having custody of a child so what rights do they have?
more please
That was really cute how you introduced Rin. And the interaction between Kags and Sess is so shyly sweet. Great Job!
Hmm interesting, are we going to get some history behind why the youkai are in zoos? I know you said no one questions it but I can't help it. :)
Elle (Chapter 3) - Sat 09 Apr 2011
I wonder why all of them (besides Sesshoumaru) were acting so weird... :S
Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
Kjpanny (Chapter 3) - Sat 09 Apr 2011
I love this story! It is so utterly unique and captivating! But you know, even after reading your explanation of the youkai in the cages, u will have to explain the real reason somewhere in ur story.......just make one up which sounbds real and plausible. But great jo b!
That was funny...pelted with fruit, harrassed by wolves and charged by a dragon. At least it worked as Naraku repellant!
LMAO!!! Kikyo pelted with food. I love it!!!
This story is so much fun, and so increadibly different. I love that about it. For some reason, in my mind I kind of decided that the youkai CHOSE to be in the exhibits, like a job or something. That there's some kind of benefit for them instead of them being like animals locked up they're more like employees in a sense. Heck, it could even be sought after positions. Maybe part of some kind of arrangement to help keep the piece, education and a way to make humans not fear, since we all know humans have a tendancy to try and kill the things they fear. Just ask any spider that crosses my path. Like the whole Koga insisting his pack come with him and Naraku requesting a transfer...contract negotiations and office transfer request. Eh, just hit my brain. Would be fun to see that pop into it, especially as Sessho and Kags advance, like if he decided to quit and take her with him. Anyway, I love what you're doing with the characters and can't wait to see what comes next!
I enjoyed this so much. I love the way you write, such a flowing easy style. You furthered the story as well as added those little humourous touches and just made it a joy to read.
The sweet little relationship that Kagome and Shippo have is very well portrayed. I liked the light hearted banter between them very much and I thought it adorable that when he was frightened "he hid in her hair." So cute.
You added a nice change of pace by having her creeped out by Naraku. I felt you really did it justice, I could feel how uncomfortable he made her very clearly.
The interchange between Kikyo and Kagome was excellent too. You painted a vivid mental picture for me as I imagined Kikyo having to grit her teeth in mortification that she was not the preferred one.
Lastly I really liked that little bit of playfulness you have imbued Sesshoumaru with. I think it will make it much more interesting having a little humour here and there rather than straight out attraction in a seductive way.
I really loved reading this and look very much forward to the next chapter. Thank you very much.
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