Reviews for Hide and Seek by Luna

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Pricila (Chapter 2) - Sat 01 Dec 2012

Oh my gosh, I have slowly been reading all your stories one by one and you are definitely gifted!  Can't wait to see how this story ends!


Samantha Tinker (Chapter 6) - Sun 08 Jan 2012

Awesome story :)


ruhiko (Chapter 6) - Wed 06 Jul 2011

You're right, I can't believe that thia is your first time ever writing a lemon~! ^O^


emerald skye (Chapter 6) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

Ha! This story was nice, sweet (in some parts, yes...), and extremely sexy. You managed to write this very tastefully even though there were some really lovel scenes of the down and dirty :P  Can't wait to read more!


Synyster Star (Chapter 6) - Sat 14 May 2011

I loved this one too! Nice and steamy! Congrats on your first lemon :P


KBloody (Chapter 6) - Thu 12 May 2011

First time you've ever written a lemon?!!?!?! No FREAKIN' way!

Seriously, those had to be some of the best written lemons I've ever had the pleasure of reading. They were so sure and confident in their sexiness, that I was certain I had been reading an author who has written them a million times before. You have an amazing talent for them, not necessarily something you could brag to your friends about, but it does make for a very brilliant future in fanfic! Add that to the amazing way you executed an original plot in 6 chapters (but still left me salivating for more), sends my opinion of this story through the roof!

Awesome job!


AmoraLynn (Chapter 6) - Sat 07 May 2011

Oh wow, one of the best lemons I've read in a very long time. 


randomfan17 (Chapter 6) - Wed 04 May 2011

Doesn't show it's your first lemon, it was awesome.


Ekaterina1313 (Chapter 6) - Wed 04 May 2011

this story war great loved everything about it. great leamons keep up with your writing


Spaceghst407 (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 May 2011

You are right! I can't believe those were your first attempts at lemons. They were absolutely wonderful! Loved this story. Great job ^_^


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 6) - Mon 02 May 2011

That was AWESOME! ^_^ I've absolutely loved this little story. Totally.

I'm still giggling about Kagome not making the connection about the owners of the house. I mean... she WAS on the phone that time Sesshomaru was telling Rin where the chocolates were. But maybe she never learned her mother's name was Kagura? Seems lacking in investigation or even communication to me. But then... well I suppose Conversation isn't how they've been doing most of their communication. :winks:

I'm almost sad this is over. Except now I can reread it at my leisure.

Thanks so much for writing!


SashaMarie (Chapter 6) - Mon 02 May 2011

I loved this story. It was awesome. Thanks for a great story.


TKE (Chapter 6) - Sun 01 May 2011

Pretty damn good for your first lemon!!!!  Very talented!!!!


Brnadi (Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Apr 2011

This is really good.


Spaceghst407 (Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Apr 2011

Ooh another chapter so quickly! I love it! Kag and Sess are so great together. Their chemistry is very hot ^_^


Elle (Chapter 5) - Sun 24 Apr 2011

I absolutely love this story! :D

I can't wait to see how it'll progress~


R.M. Avalon (Chapter 5) - Sun 24 Apr 2011

Oh man @_@ I am now officially a devout follower of this story too... geeze woman... you're going to have me following you around begging for chapters from now on, you know that right?

Brilliant Job!


R.M. Avalon (Chapter 4) - Sun 24 Apr 2011

ASDFGHJKLHOLYWOW @_@ You should write lemons more often, Luna! That was HOT!


Lily Noir (Chapter 4) - Sun 24 Apr 2011

ooooh...... AWESOME ....... sexy, sassy kagome & horny, smokin' sesshomaru ......... a match made on the heavenly plane ..... update soon, I can't wait to see if he'll keep her to himself or turn her in...

~lily


Spaceghst407 (Chapter 4) - Sun 24 Apr 2011

Wowzers! That was certainly hot and steamy! Wonder what is going to happen next? Sessy's boss isn't going to be as nice to her as he was. Great update! Can't wait to see what's next ^_^


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