Oh my gosh, I have slowly been reading all your stories one by one and you are definitely gifted! Can't wait to see how this story ends!
Awesome story :)
ruhiko (Chapter 6) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
You're right, I can't believe that thia is your first time ever writing a lemon~! ^O^
Ha! This story was nice, sweet (in some parts, yes...), and extremely sexy. You managed to write this very tastefully even though there were some really lovel scenes of the down and dirty :P Can't wait to read more!
I loved this one too! Nice and steamy! Congrats on your first lemon :P
KBloody (Chapter 6) - Thu 12 May 2011
First time you've ever written a lemon?!!?!?! No FREAKIN' way!
Seriously, those had to be some of the best written lemons I've ever had the pleasure of reading. They were so sure and confident in their sexiness, that I was certain I had been reading an author who has written them a million times before. You have an amazing talent for them, not necessarily something you could brag to your friends about, but it does make for a very brilliant future in fanfic! Add that to the amazing way you executed an original plot in 6 chapters (but still left me salivating for more), sends my opinion of this story through the roof!
Awesome job!
Oh wow, one of the best lemons I've read in a very long time.
Doesn't show it's your first lemon, it was awesome.
this story war great loved everything about it. great leamons keep up with your writing
You are right! I can't believe those were your first attempts at lemons. They were absolutely wonderful! Loved this story. Great job ^_^
That was AWESOME! ^_^ I've absolutely loved this little story. Totally.
I'm still giggling about Kagome not making the connection about the owners of the house. I mean... she WAS on the phone that time Sesshomaru was telling Rin where the chocolates were. But maybe she never learned her mother's name was Kagura? Seems lacking in investigation or even communication to me. But then... well I suppose Conversation isn't how they've been doing most of their communication. :winks:
I'm almost sad this is over. Except now I can reread it at my leisure.
Thanks so much for writing!
I loved this story. It was awesome. Thanks for a great story.
TKE (Chapter 6) - Sun 01 May 2011
Pretty damn good for your first lemon!!!! Very talented!!!!
Brnadi (Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Apr 2011
This is really good.
Ooh another chapter so quickly! I love it! Kag and Sess are so great together. Their chemistry is very hot ^_^
Elle (Chapter 5) - Sun 24 Apr 2011
I absolutely love this story! :D
I can't wait to see how it'll progress~
Oh man @_@ I am now officially a devout follower of this story too... geeze woman... you're going to have me following you around begging for chapters from now on, you know that right?
Brilliant Job!
ASDFGHJKLHOLYWOW @_@ You should write lemons more often, Luna! That was HOT!
ooooh...... AWESOME ....... sexy, sassy kagome & horny, smokin' sesshomaru ......... a match made on the heavenly plane ..... update soon, I can't wait to see if he'll keep her to himself or turn her in...
~lily
Wowzers! That was certainly hot and steamy! Wonder what is going to happen next? Sessy's boss isn't going to be as nice to her as he was. Great update! Can't wait to see what's next ^_^
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