I'm not one much for darkfics but this one is rather good not being a reader of darkfics this one was rather disturbing but I must say you have excellent taste in music =)

hmm...is Kaggy's munchkin somehow still alive? maybe on a spiritual level.....or is she really nuts?

personally I'm fine reading an unbeta'ed version until you can find a beta.... I really wanna see what will happen next.

Cool story so far, I like the direction its heading. Keep up the good work & please update soon:)

excellent, i can't wait to see what happens *^_^* ((( o and ur story is not jarring, i've read way worse, if there were mistakes they were so completely minor that u'd never need to bother w/ a beta reader, despite what lessraya said )))

I read the chapters you has posted at ASS, Iwas afraid it was going to be abandon. Glad to see you are still working on this story. Please update ASAP

hmm i didn't find it hard to read at all but then again my beta is a life saver i love it keep it up

I LOVED it! Great job!

It has some potential, but you really need to get a beta or at least a spell-checker. "Species" is spelled with an s, even when it's singular. And "inexistant" isn't a word, I think you meant "nonexistent". There were lots of other mistakes too, and while it wasn't enough to make the story unreadable, it was very jarring.