Aw! It's so funny how happy having a chapter dedication makes me XD Loved Shippou and Rin playing Hunt! Too cute! And I can't wait for them to call Kagome okaa-san! I know it's just gonna make her day :)
YAY!!!!! The semester is over in two weeks!!!
This chapter was chock full of so much awesomeness that I can't even begin to comprehend it. First, there was Kagome pwning Kimi-sama (I'm nicknaming her bc her name is like the entire aphabet) with words, and then with strength. After that, there were the heart-wrenching scrolls. They made my breath catch in my throat. I felt so sad when you told of Rin's tale with such poignancy. Kimi then decides to join forces with the Kags, and they're going to go yell at Sesshomaru!
This was amazing, Lira. Keep it up.
I mean, I know you will, cuz that's who you are and how your writing is, but I'm stepping back into the role of Lira's cheerleader.
*waves pom-poms* Go Lira, go! Gimme an L! I! R! A! Goooooooooo Lira!
~*~
:3
Eklipse (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Apr 2011
LOVE this story so far. Continue to write, your great at it.
I enjoyed the chapters very much! :) But I gotta say - if Sesshoumaru is so worried about Kagome getting challenged, he should have made sure she had training and knew what was going to happen! AHH He made me soo frustrated!! >:( I know you're not going to kill off Kagome - er well, I'm pretty sure you aren't going to do that.. but still - lol Can't wait to read more! Ugh I seriously need to get some work done lol
REDWOLF (Chapter 29) - Sat 30 Apr 2011
Mymy....this is interesting. Sesshoumaru not knowing everything. I like surprises.
Kamiki (Chapter 25) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for all this anticipation to break!! I can't wait to read what's next :)
Well, I can say that this is one of the best stories I have ever read. And to REALLY impress me is hard. Sure, I may say that the ones I review are good, great and such, but that is the spur of the moment thing, I usually forget them within a week. This is one of the rare ones I will actually remember for a long time to come. Not to mention that you have a way of writing that just captivetes people. You've really outdone yourself.
Now, on to the part my wee little brain can't fully comprehend: - Eldest! She will not even cross their minds! The last Dragon-miko to mate a lord of High House was the mate of the last Dragonlord - When I first read it I thought that Eldest was the Mate of the last Dragonlord. Then, when I got a better look, the feeling was more that she wasn't the mate. But Kasuka once said that her mother was still alive, and Eldest is the last dragon-miko .... and I'm confused. What I get from how its written is that she isn't the mate, but logical deduction from already stated facts says that she is.
Can't wait for the next update :)
~lily
Whoa, Kouga's got some backbone :) ... Kasuka had it coming, not everything goes the was she wants it. And I'm sooooo gonna enjoy reading the part whaere se finds out Yasha's already dead, and that Sessh's mate is Inu, and that she is miko and powerful... Happy time's a comin' .... heh heh
Everyone usually thinks that Kouga is easily influenced, but they forget that he has quite a brain in that thick head of his. You've captured him exactly like I see him in the canon; as a matter of fact, most of your characters are In Character, a feat not many manage to acomplish. I'd take off my hat (and applaud you) right about now, if I had one on my head. ;)
OH, and I can already see the disaster that'll come when Kouga figures out it's really Kagome. Ugh, strom's a brewin'...
~lily
he he he he, gotta say that I was also expecting something a bit more ...naughty .... heh ;P
I get the feeling that Kasuka was/is still scared of the Inu no Taisho. And Kagome, able to feel what's going on; she could be the key to beating Kasuka (most likely is, if that Elder person is any indication)
And Oh dear, you dedicated an entire chapter to me because I pointed out a tiny little thing. I'm honoured, and you're awesome. I checked it out, and it's so much clearer now, really appropriate. You did a great job. I really like authors that take somonelse's imput into consideration, a brownie point to you XD.
I'm off to read more, and I say, this is a fentastic thing to wake up to.
~lily
I can't wait to read more! I was hoping I'd get to read about the whole ceremony thing and Kouga coming over. But I'll be patient! lol These were good chapters though! :) And this is better than studying for o chem! :) Ja ne!
Luna (Chapter 25) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
O.O I am absolutely boggle eyed at the thought of Sesshoumaru's mother. That will be one Inu biatch I would not want to cross swords with!
Luna (Chapter 24) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
Kasuka is an arrogant, evil girl. I cant wait to see her humiliation!! :grins evilly:
REDWOLF (Chapter 25) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
I hope Kagome surprises them all.
Luna (Chapter 23) - Fri 29 Apr 2011
^^ hearts you!
Great chapter, I loved what you wrote about Rin and Shippo! But it also makes me reeeaaalllyyy worried for Miroku and Sango!
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