Fantastic story. I like how different this story is. I do have question that you can either answer or make me wait:
- Sesshomaru and his father are demons, Inu for that matter, if Kagome and Sesshomaru don't consummate the marriage (provided everyone lives through daddy finding out) wouldn't Inu no Taisho be able to tell? I have a feeling you're going to have an out for this question.
I love that Kagome isn't a wilting flower who just sits back and takes what she can get, and Sesshomaru is such a breath of fresh air! He SMILES!
Great plot and I can only imagine the drama that may ensue once papa decides Sesshomaru hasn't done the job to obtain Kagome for Inuyasha.
Yay!! She agreed...fianlly! Now, how will he deal with his Father and Inuyasha? This is going to be quite interesting!
Awww, poor Sesshoumaru. Oh, the chapter was divine and just what I needed after this updating drought. I feel bad for Sesshoumaru but I still have a feeling that his sex drive shouldn't kick in until after the wedding, like something is going to happen, or maybe not and he can reveal to her, "hey remember those kids, you can have them, sired by me" and whatnot. Inutaisho is extreme this time, very harsh and to hear he would have his son assasinated, he's over the top, it's so unique. I really enjoyed the first meeting between Kagome and Sesshoumaru as a courting pair. I just hope Inutaisho doesn't show up and find out.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Whooo! You updated!! I love this story! I'm so glad you updated! I woke up this morning thinking today would suck. Then a story that I haven't read in forever has updated! It brightened my day. I hope that you update again and keep up with this story. It is very well written and has an intriguing story line.
Zugaikotsu-Chan (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Jul 2011
Yeeepp! I was thrilled when I saw that you had updated! Great chapter! I loved every word of it, and I am so glad to see that Sesshomaru is not the usual playboy, experienced lover, that knows all about pleasure, but is intead as inexperienced as Kagome! It's refreshing to see him like this and I love it! Please update soon!
Zalika (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Jul 2011
I really like this story. You don't seem to update a lot, but when you do, it is worth the wait. Can't wait until the next chapter.
I must say that I truly love this beginning. Making InuTaisho the power driven male to the point that he might kill his own offspring is intriguing. I have to say that I've never read a story with him being so ruthless. I am also intrigued by Sesshoumaru not being fully mature as of yet. His having to cover that fact is interesting.
I do have a suggestion, if you don't mind. Where Sesshoumaru called Kagome his fiance, shouldn't you use the word "intended". I don't believe that they knew french during that time period, although, you didn't actually state what time this is. I'm just assuming that it's during the Feudal Era. Anyway, just a thought. I can't wait to read more! JEN
yasurei (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Jul 2011
This story is so wonderful! Great and unique plot, excellent grammar and spelling and finally someone who knows the basics to Japanese culture like the rightful addressing. So glad that there are still a few really good fics out there, 95% are utterly crap.
I like the portrayal of Sesshoumaru, it fits rather well with this story without making him totally OOC. Even Kagome is still the loveable Kagome Higurashi, just a bit more cynical but under these circumstances also very fitting. Thanks for sharing!
Phoenix (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Jul 2011
I just have to say, I find this to be a clever, innovative and interesting story! Definitely one of my favorites, and definitely a breath of fresh air! I do hope you continue this!
Coastin (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Jul 2011
wait so can they have children or not? i'm confused?!
Awesome chapter though!
Paige (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Jul 2011
Thank you for updating!
I hope to read more of this story soon. :D
sara (Chapter 3) - Mon 06 Jun 2011
This is really different and very interesting to read. Who would have thought that Sesshoumaru is still a virgin
Darcy (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jun 2011
I'm so stoked to read the next chapter! Definitely got my attention wrapped around your finger! Please update soon! ^^
Good luck Sess! You are definitely going to need it!
oh! what an interesting twist! i lveo this!
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