LOVE LOVE LOVE the story it enticed me from the beginning. I love the plot of the story and the way it's so dar, seductive, just everything. I can't wait for the next update! I love your other stories too like "Maid for you".
KT (Chapter 1) - Sun 22 May 2011
Somehow after reading this chapter, it made me thing of the name of this story. Birds in paradise really fits this story. After all birds are beautiful creatures. Paradise can also refer to the please where you get all your heart's desire. Interesting name really!
Oh my..I don't mind being his(Sesshoumaru's) slave at all..just like Kagome said... *dreamy look* I love your update!! great job!!
amy (Chapter 5) - Sun 22 May 2011
She is no prude!
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I wouldn't mind joining that club as well ;) *lecherous smirk*
~lily
Wow.
First off, yay for smut! lol. Secondly, I love your writing style; you have a definite way with words, that's for sure. You're also doing an awesome job with keeping Kagome and Sesshomaru in character.
Exceptional work so far! Keep it up!
~Aubrey
amy (Chapter 4) - Wed 18 May 2011
initiation anyone? interesting, what will happen when Inuyasha finds out!
Okay, now I really need a cold shower...that was really...
please update soon!!
Alice (Chapter 4) - Wed 18 May 2011
It's sooo intense! *_*
amy (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 May 2011
SO she will be his, i am amazed.
OMG this is wonderful! I hope you will daily or every second will do too. This story is fantastic. I love your writing style!!
Lets not lose the tradition, Eeee. Sesshomaru is definitely the pain-pleasure kind of guy :)
Every chapter made me think "Eeeee, run" Too much heat Pff
EEp! Here it is!
KS (Chapter 2) - Mon 16 May 2011
Whoa way to cliffie... O - O What happens next? i can,t wait Great work on building the suspense
Oh, This is interesting!
gah!
Lyra (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 May 2011
You posted it, you posted it! SQUEE! :D More, please; this is really good!
lara (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 May 2011
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