It's nice to see Kagome is back in high spirits. What did the baby do to the shirt O_o
I liked that the characters acted close to canon while being different enough to reflect the different situations. I didn't like how it switched perspective so often (might be cause of that prologue/chapter 1 merger...?), was kinda disorientating, the idea is good it just could have been done with like half the frequency. I hope Kagome acts Tsundere to Sesshomaru in later chapters ^^ 
  
      
Kristen (Chapter 16) -  Wed 30 May 2012 
Really?! :[ I am now extremely sad. Good thing yous said there will be weekly updates :] 
      
Kristen (Chapter 15) -  Wed 30 May 2012 
Why you guys no kiss yet? Sorry, I had to. But, seriously, it's time for them to give each other some love :] 
      
Kristen (Chapter 14) -  Wed 30 May 2012 
The last part was my favorite of the chapter, I think. It seems as if things are starting to progress into more intimate territory :D 
      
YOU CAN'T JUST END IT THERE!!!!! 
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
  ~Sandreline  
      
Kristen (Chapter 13) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
Another amazing chapter, this couple is just too cute :] 
      
Kristen (Chapter 12) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
I'm actually going to a University (and college) for the first time this coming fall. I'm already stressed with just the thought of everything I'll have to do, so I commend you in having the time and patience to sit and right for us. Thank you so very much, and I really, really enjoy this story :] 
      
Kristen (Chapter 11) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
This was a very cute chapter :] I enjoyed it very much. I think the next chapter will be my last for the night, so I hope it's really good! (Which I have no doubt it will be) 
      
Kristen (Chapter 10) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
I'm very much anticipating Shesshoumaru's reaction to their little surprise visit :] I can't wait. Good thing I don't have to. 
      
Kristen (Chapter 9) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
I'm going to be so tired for work in the morning, but I can't help but keep reading! This is definitely a great story, and you have a great tallent. 
      
Kristen (Chapter 8) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
Sesshoumaru, calm youself. Stressing me out :[ 
      
Kristen (Chapter 7) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
Now that's what I'm talking about. I love when Sesshoumaru eats his words (in cases such as this). Never underestimate a woman. 
      
Kristen (Chapter 6) -  Tue 29 May 2012 
I can see myself losing sleep over this story :] I'm in love. 
      
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