I love how you have Izayoi expressing her feelings! You had her explain it well, but a direct explanation would get pretty confusing!
(I don't know, something along the lines of: she starting to hate, but not quite hate Kagome, feels a rather small amount of dislike towards Touga, though she knows she should dislike him more, might be getting a bit female-doggish, but not female-doggish, becaused her emotions make very much sense and would be natural for her to feel that way.)
I wonder how Izayoi will deal with this? Will she actually do adultery? Hm, poor girl. This had one repetitive factor that was in all the others, though. It was frickin' awesome. Job well done. Update soon!
JA NE!
(forgot to say :p) I hope Izayoi doesn't go off the deep end...
Junjou Romantica right! (read it a while ago, but I remember that name, I think he's the one who's with the teacher...? *maybe*)
Kar (Chapter 25) - Sat 11 Jun 2011
uuuhhooohhhhh. will inu no taishou find out about izayoi? will they be able to save their relationship? will Sesshomaru and Kagome be able to get Inu no taishou off their backs? so many questions!!! please review soon or i am afraid that i might combust into flames from the wait. BTW I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KT (Chapter 24) - Wed 08 Jun 2011
Terrible timing, bad timing. And yet, that is what makes all your stories so interesing. Cliffies!!! Getting kagome stuck and unstuck lol
Regardless, it would be really sweet if she answered truly, and funnier if inutaisho walked in on it. LOL But then again, that would really complicate things. But anyways, I can,t wait to hear her response!
KT (Chapter 23) - Tue 07 Jun 2011
And finally after re-reading the previous chapter, it makes me wonder how they can un-convince inutaisho of his feelings for kagome. And what would be really embarassing is if inutaisho actually heard her crying and heard her talking to sesshoumaru. Yikes. Now that would be/could be chaos. But regardless, I can,t wait to see how the next chapter will turn out.
Now that i know what happened, it explains sesshoumaru and kagome's previous reaction. The worst is what's done is done.
KT (Chapter 23) - Tue 07 Jun 2011
Reading it over again, I kind of feel sorry for inutaisho's wife. Seriously.. his husband is beginning to lust after another woman. Yikes. This is what you call digging a hole for yourself... or in this case Herself. lol
KT (Chapter 23) - Tue 07 Jun 2011
Oh boy, by the middle of that chapter, I was all nervous with foreboding, but at the same time there was that urging feeling to finish reading. Ha ha Oh boy kagome really didn,t know what she did...did she.
Great work!
Nyuka (Chapter 23) - Tue 07 Jun 2011
Oh so that was what all the crying was about...oh god I though this was after the fact and her tring to fix it...but omg this is really...REALLY BAD.....im frightened to keep reading...try for updating though
I"m loving this story! But... you got cahpter 22 switched with chapter 23...
Nyuka (Chapter 22) - Tue 07 Jun 2011
Phew talk about the weight of the world....eeee this chapter feel so heavy with emotion....and all the things I thought of ending the situation, were not very healthy or smart considering they were all a way of running away from ones problems....*sigh* I am all wound up now...XD Ty for updating...
Nyuka
KT (Chapter 1) - Mon 06 Jun 2011
Ah... poor kagome. I guess she really feels as if she is always being blamed, always blaming herself. It is kind of good that she released all the pent up sorrow.
And yes, it was a very nicely flowing fantastic chapter! ;D Great work!!!
This was a great chapter, but I want details on what happened Fathers' Day!
annoymes (Chapter 22) - Mon 06 Jun 2011
ok love the story but it upload like three times it ok
Itoe (Chapter 21) - Mon 06 Jun 2011
lol Nurse Sesshomaru. Well I would say so too. He is a good one! :D *kukuku*
I wonder, where Izayoi and Inu no Taisho are... xD But I am somewhat glad, he did not interrupt them this time... And I hope, he isn't going to interrupt them, while they sleep all together... xD *kukukuku*
cheers
KT (Chapter 20) - Sun 05 Jun 2011
I love how every chapter just winds up with enexpected results. Ha ha hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. And it really looks like kagome needs to find out more about demons because you never know what her unexpected actions might trigger.
Great word and thanks for the update once again!
Lheii (Chapter 20) - Sun 05 Jun 2011
Hn, Erotic Spankings!! :D
Great Chapter!! :D
Nyuka (Chapter 19) - Sun 05 Jun 2011
One wish, One wish if only, to be a fish...lol I love this story...but I did not (when I started reading) for see the infatuation Touga was going to have for Kagome ...and what of Izayoi? Shurlly she has seen what has been going on? She need to grow some curage and set her man straight thats what I have to say...XD That would be an interesting thing to see I think...XD This story is getting really crazy though and I wonder often when she will be taken from the past because there can't be much more she has to do there...wonder what the future consaquence will be for all her medaling...hmmmm...love it all
Nyuka
You updated, AGAIN?! I love you. Seriously, I do.(Not in a creepy way, though.) I really wonder(it seems like I say the word 'wonder' in evey review...) what's going to happen between Kagome, Izayoi and Inutaisho? When is Kagome goin back, and how will the future change?
An amazing job was done on these last two chapters.
JA NE!
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