Well, damn, if that's not creepy as all hell. But, oh, so very good!
gah! more! lol love this.
Now she knows Kagome never lied!! And still she let him discover where she was. How is it you live on a shrine but have no idea that anything could be in the realm of possibility. Tsk, Tsk. Poor Kagome, she's going to be attacked again.
f+++ing awesome! i hope the mother gets some of the blame now. love this story!
Zeika (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Jun 2011
Oh goodness, wonderful chapter. I really can't wait for the next one. =)
if i woke up from a nightmare and read something like that in a book, i would be so freaked out that i wouldnt sleep either. it was great though. Seriously, is this really your first time writing something dark? i was totally fooled, im already tense and yet i cant tear my eyes away!
Aviator (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Jun 2011
o my gosh! soooo epic, what is exactly is the thing attacking her? please update, this is AMAZING!
wow, that's kind of rough. I feel sorry for Kagome, but i have to say, the detail you put into explaining what Kagome went through was so cool. ot was so palpable and i cant wait to see how that part plays out. Im loving this!
Wow. I'm really enjoying this story. And you're right, this is definitely darker than your other fics, but it has this sense of mystique and intrigue to it that really draws the reader in. I look forward to reading more of this and delving deeper into what's going on with Kagome.
Zeika (Chapter 3) - Mon 20 Jun 2011
Wonderful chapter. Only three chapters in and I'm already thrilled about new chapters for this. Thanks for updating, can't wait for the next one.
Kar (Chapter 3) - Sun 19 Jun 2011
ohhhh spokey he just vanished lol
me likey story, me likey story, onegai write more!!!!
i'm so digging on this story. i'm very curious on sess's role here. cant wait to read more!
eryn (Chapter 3) - Sat 18 Jun 2011
THis is getting exciting! I hope to hear more soon!
Dunn dunnnnn dunnnnnnnn and Sessy has appeared! So very sexy I loovveees it! Awesome job and I can't wait to see what twists and turns you come up with next :D
/me needs more of this story. MOAR!! lol
I'm really enjoying this so far- I'm so happy you decided to give the challenge a try.
Though you did make me a li'l wary, lol- I've never seen Hour of the Wolf (never actually heard of it til you mentioned it in your footnote) and, let me tell you, for years I've been plagued with waking up for no apparent reason between three and four in the morning, and when I say plagued, I mean, there was a time I even tried sleeping aids and still, once it got to that time of the morning, BAM, I'd be wide awake.
Keep up the great work- gonna run over to the forums now and up your Karma :)
CylentKiaru23 (Chapter 2) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
Awesome story so far. I am thoroughly creeped out at the moment which means you're a great writer (it also might have to do with the fact that its 3:33 am where I am right now...yes I looked around my room just in case...) Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
O0o0o0o it becomes more interesting with this new chapter! I can't wait for the next one to see what happens next! You are doing very well for your first dip into Dark fiction lol. <3
Noacat (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Jun 2011
Too lazy to sign in... I LOVE THE NEW STORY. You win extra internets for making a reference to Bergman.
Zeika (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Jun 2011
Wonderful story so far! Can't wait to see how it goes... I like the darker theme, it's as good as your light, happy stories.
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