What the Hades is Kagome thinking? If I was her, I would be saying, "Yes! A thousand times yes! Make me and give me that delicious cock!"
She must be crazy, haha. I love this story! I was squealing with glee when I saw the alert that you had updated. It was a nice, long, HOT chapter! Love it!!! Can't wait for more!
~Sandreline
Oh High Ones... :fans self: hot Hot HOT!! :fans more:
Hm... maybe Sesshomaru should state that in denying those 'dripping female demonesses' he was running across Japan LOOKING FOR KAGOME. I don't think she quite gets that.
Nor that to Truly deny Sesshomaru she will have to not react to him. To not want him. Which clearly she does.
Thanks so much for writing!
catrice (Chapter 5) - Thu 20 Oct 2011
:^"singing"Its getting Hot in here! lol OMG.. keep it coming! great story!
I love this story, please update soon I want to know what happens next with sesshoumaru and kagome.
Ceysna (Chapter 4) - Sat 24 Sep 2011
*rubs hands together* This is looking good! I like the changes you made to Chap 3. It adds structer and conflict. I like how things are moving along Duchess. The way you explained Kags and Aim meeting up, perfect. Very believablely Kagome. I almost feel bad for nurse Kagome though.... almost... not really... because that is one _FINE_ patient! I have to wonder, how long to affects of the "posion" last. And if they only bring out the hidden desires, because Sesshy only went after Kags. Hmm...
Great updates, love the changes, looking forward to more! Please keep up the great work!
I like your story. The plot is very interesting and well developed for the start of the story. I look forward to reading more.
OMG I am so happy you updated. I was excited to see it. And it is looking intersting =D hopefully you will update soon =D
Satsukifujin (Chapter 4) - Thu 22 Sep 2011
Oh, I am liking this story very much. Yes I am! XD Keep it up!
GAH!!! i am now completely and utterly infatuated with this!!!!! cant wait for the next update!!!
*thows tantrum* It's not enough!!!! I want more!!!! -_- I really enjoy it so far, but I can't say I'm not agitated that there isn't more for me to read. Jabora is being a total ass, so I simply must see how Kagome handles him. Aimaru is his great lecherous, humorous, friendly self, so I just want to watch him do anything. Sesshoumaru has his own troubles going on, so I just want to see how his illness and his 'delusional' conversations play out with Kagome. Overall, I'm so wound up from wanting to see all the things that are to occur, I don't know how I will be able to wait for the next chapter without possibly annoying you or developing a twitch. :/
--Kaminoko (c)2011
The BEST kinda trouble miroku! and hahahahahaha@ demon bracelet! i also kinda love that kagome ahs her own adventures without overprotective asshat inuyasha
okay so i re-read, and i liked the details and inner thoughts more, so awesome job! on to chapter 4 now!
O_O i likes more.s o i goes to read, i just wanted to let you know i'll re-review AGAIN after that. tyhen on to chapter 4! *totally has DOD fiction stalker cape on*
lol spare a limb!
O_O
Uh oh
Oh no! Kagome stay in ur house!
Lumi (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 Sep 2011
Your intimate contact, as always, never fails to please.
I'm a bit curious as to Kagome and Aimaru's already knowing each other. It seemed rather sudden, though I suppose I can see how it would be helpful in this case. I don't mean to offend, but your stories with Aimaru tend to lean on him quite a bit. Many of the other characters feel neglected in comparison.
Out of curiosity, did Kagome bring her bag or did Miroku pick it up or is it just sitting by the well forgotten?
Poor Jabora...he should have know Sessh is horribly bad at normal romance...this complicated one was destined to fail miserably
pauly (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 Sep 2011
WOW!!!!! This chapter was so GREAT!!! honestly, the way you described his suffering was just so amazing I couldn´t stop reading, not that I wanted to, anyway. You´re a genius, a talented writer I totally love this story and I hope you update really soon. Keep up the excellent work.
please hurry and write more
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