Reviews for Avalanche by Luna

typicalyssa (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jul 2012

*gasps* That's all??!

I was just getting into the plot. Seems like Kagome wished she'd never went back the Feudal Era, and it came true, which would explain why she doesn't recognise Sesshoumaru at all... But that does not explain how the wish made Sesshoumaru turn up at her doorstep in a snowstorm and then leave just like that! 

Please continue on with this story! There are some huge missing links here!!


Kirai (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jul 2011

awwww!!! I wanna know what is gonna happen next! Sess can't just leave like that!!


naqaashi (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

You just went and broke my heart. On a Monday. Now I need some tender, loving care, too ... :(


dreamcatcher (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

What a story, what an ending. Dear Luna, I really loved it, yet if it left me with a mixture of the strangest feelings. When I reached the end I had only one thought: Could this really be the end? You have created a mindblowing plot with absolutely unsuspected twists. Please more of stories like this.

 

Even I admit I am defenitely addicted to more happy stories, this was well worth the read! ^-^


Madison (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

Dude. WHAT.

Alright, I kinda wasn't expecting that. At first I was like, Kagome know who this is, I mean I do, and then she talks about his markings and everything and I'm like oh, so it's like an AU, and he's a lost man who ends up being there. AND HOLY CRAP NO! Lady you just sneaked up a plot on me that I was not expecting! Mindblown right now to the max. 

I have to say I really really like this and I don't care if the planet blows up you're going to have to write more. I love this Sesshomaru. He's very much like the one we're used to, but there's a hint of him maturing over the years, which well is obviously something that would happen. Anyways, I like it. I wonder why he was so surprised to find himself in those years? Had he been roaming for a like time? UGH SEE I NEED MORE.

If not I'm sitting you down and forcing you to answer all my questions until your head blows up.

This is so promising and I'm already addicted.

 


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

O_O AH! That is so not the ending I was expecting. SAD!!! DX So good, but so sad! I demand fluffy chapters to beta now!


MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Jun 2011

Dear Luna,

I don't about you, but I got the most strange mixture of feelings from reading this oneshot.

From what I thought would turn out to be a typical Kagome-meets-injured-Sesshoumaru scenario, the story evolved into a powerful medley of words which brought the readers on an emotional jetcoaster. With a slightly humorous and light-hearted start, you caught us readers off guard when it became increasingly that our male and female leads are separated not by time, not by physical distance but by their memories. That, to me, is more tragic than the former types of distance. He clearly remembers a Kagome who was the miko who travelled with Inuyasha and company, but she no longer remembers, except for the ghostly shadows of recollection lurking in her mind.

Put that together, throw in a skillfully portrayed setting and we get a powerful oneshot.

It is very, very well-written indeed, and I love it that we have stories of such quality on Dokuga. This is going into my favorites.

Good luck with the tournament!

Love,

MissTeak


Lyra (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 Jun 2011

Wheee!  So prettiful; humorous, sharp, and at the same time tragic.  Wonderful job!


Synyster Star (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

Lol oh I love this Luna! :D Definitely a different twist to the blanket scenario lol.


Fallen0x (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

I really liked this, but I was sad that it was so short! it might have made an interesting chapter story! :)


Eryn (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

That was great!  I can't wait to hear more.  So mysterious!


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

Very interesting.  Don't think I've ever seen a story where she makes a wish like that, even on accident.  Good luck :).


summerbirdy (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

this gave me a thirst for more. 


insomniac_amy (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

I like it!

So many questions and of course I don't see Sess answering any of them anytime soon! Poor Kagome.


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