That was really sad. The poem was powerful but i think i liked the story a little better. Great job hun

You and Luna...breaking people's hearts left right and centre. ::wails::

Phew, that was so sad... A great story, a phantastic poem.

Interesting take on Sesshomaru's personality.

I really though it would end with all of them dying, I was surprised that she was alive. At first I had hoped she was then you moved on, and I thought guess not. Good thing he realized that before he buried her! 

It was really sad! Good job on it. 

Cute. I thought it would end differently.

Dear Hairann,

This was definitely a very enjoyable piece to read. I enjoyed the poem with its simple yet powerful words, and the fact that you kept Sesshoumaru very much in character throughout the entire story.

The striking mental image of a lone demon lord digging graves for the people he once knew and respected to a certain degree, against a background of carnage and destruction, could not have been if not for your skills in description and imagery.

As a reader, I was looking forward to more since the oneshot ended off at a point where the reader has the full freedom to imagine what comes next. But as a fellow writer, I feel that it was nice in a way - slightly poignant, slightly hopeful and downright mysterious.

Your interpretation of the prompt 'Avalanche' was also refreshingly fitting.

A great job done, I'd say. Good luck with the tournament!

Love,
MissTeak

Very sad Hairann, but very beautiful as wel :) Lovely job.

I liked your story, though it was pretty sad and it made me want to read more!

Ah, I adored the poem

Oooh dark! Poor Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but perhaps companionship can be gained from the tragedy?