Amazing, i like it a lot! I'm not sure if you have any plans on continuing this still, but my vote would be yes.
Can you plz continue this. I really loved it and I would want to know what happens to them after everything.
wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Aug 2011
Yes...continue, please!!!! I think I've already said my peace but just in case you missed it...
YES!!!
This fic is awesome!
wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 Jul 2011
YES, you should continue this! It is awesome!
It was interesting in both its ups and downs, but there was a sprinkling of few spelling/word misuse errors throughout. Overall, it still had it's appeal.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Raelia (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Jul 2011
I agree, the idea's a tad overused... but either way, I still want for you to continue with it!! :D
Lovely story. A bit more on Kagome's view on her ending relationship with Inuyasha than her budding relationship with Sesshomaru though -just seems unbalanced to me. Well written though, and a pleasure to read.
Though you Could continue this, I feel it is perfectly delightful the way that it is. I'd only suggest you write more if the inspiration to do so pushes you. Otherwise it's just fine as a stand-alone piece.
Thank you for writing!
I love this story, really. I was reading your ending authors note and I was thinking/hopeing that if you did continue it that you please, oh please!, don't make it like all the other stories out there. I really hope that if you do continue it, it's something original and that is epic! :) However, even as a one shot it's still a really good story, I love how it played out and how you built it to a climax and closed it. :) Please continue to write.
Sakura (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Jun 2011
| This was an amazing one-shot! i loved it! i really do hope u make this into a chapter story! People would mot likely say it would ruin it, but with the way u write, and the plot of this story, u can make this a very long and awesomee story. if u decide to add more chapters, i hope u update soon
Shay (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Jun 2011
It was good. It makes a good oneshot but if you want to continue it as a full story thats up to you.
There were a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes, and misuse of several words and punctuation. If you plan to make it a longer story you should get a beta-reader to edit it for you. It certainly has potential though.
If you would like this oneshot/chapter edited, I would be happy to do it for you.
Overall it was a good oneshot.
mary (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Jun 2011
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