Hehehe! This is very cute! You did a good job!

This has to be one of the most adorable stories I've ever read. Thank you! Don't know if it was coincidence or what, but day before reading this, I made red velvet cake with coco powder in it. ^^

Heartwarming, I liked this story a lot and the ending promised so much.

heh, gotta love a computers idea of spell check. I meant to say culinairy...darn computer.

I am a cilinairy graduate and your story touched my heart. Please contuie writing and expanding this story, for I early look forward to reading more of it. =^-^=

this was cute a little sad on the rin's death thing...

So cute! And I gotta say, I loved the ending too! XD

Such a wonderful idea!  Love it. :) 

This is nice and touching. Awesome job.

Awe that was so adorable! I love how you had nearly everyone in there, or found a way to bring them all together even if it was in picture or re-incarnation. I think the ending was great and it shows that there are many possibilities now that they are a family. I think you used the prompt wonderfully! I didn't know what the heck to do with it ahah. I adore also how Kagome basically re-gain Sango into her life, that was really sweet. Past & Present mixed together! Plus all the deliciousness of CHOCOLATE. I want some cake & cupcakes now ahah. 

You did a terrific job with this! :)