What a kick ass first chapter. I love that Rin is a warrior. I always thought it a natural thing to do since she's sess' ward and all. Can't wait to continue reading. Thanks for writing!
I read this story two years ago on fanfiction, and I read it a long time ago on this site too. I'm just finishing leaving a review, it's an awesome story, I hope you post new chapters on fanfiction likr you did on this site. Keep it coming, Happy New Year!
mari (Chapter 27) - Sat 28 Sep 2013
i really love this story thanks.
PLEASE UPDATE MORE I LOVE IT -FAN GIRL SCREAM AND THEN FAINTS-
SISTER: I WAS WAITING FOR THAT TO HAPPEN NOW I CAN READ THE UPDATES WITHOUT HER MUWAHAHA!!!!
NOPE NICE TRY!! BUT SERIOUSLY PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Of course! The previous guardian had to have a lover, and Kagome has someone new looking to snatch her away. Can't wait to see what happens next! Welcome Back!
Eve (Chapter 27) - Sun 12 May 2013
Oh My, Oh My hehehe
so good and another type of cliffy.
Oh please update again soon.
I'll always await your next Chapter. Your a good story weaver and this one has me spellbound.
Great Job!
It's been eight months you last update, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapters soon and not in months. Keep it coming, Happy Mother's Day!
Great story, I read it on fanfiction a year ago. Keep it coming.
orchid (Chapter 26) - Sat 04 Feb 2012
please update soon......
How enchanting! I don't think Sess will ever make it to his meeting.
Nothing like taking a guy's breath away. :) Can't wait for the next update!
~~OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! That was FANTASTIC! XD Can't wait to read more! LOVE the dancing part!!! I wish more people would include it!
I have seen many stories that use Taiyoukai instead of Daiyoukai and i have never known the Taiyoukai ment Fishyoukai. lol also.... WHY! Why did someone have to call Sesshoumaru!!! *Pouts* i wanted them to kiss.
Kar (Chapter 25) - Wed 03 Aug 2011
KAMI WHY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!!!!?!??!?!!?!!?
they were just about to KISS AND NOW THEY GONNA JUMP APART LIKE WOOOOHHHH WHAT JUST HAPPENED THERE AND PRETEND THAT NONE OF THAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!! AND IM GONNA BE LIKE WTF WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND INTERUPT THEM!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?1?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???!?!!!??!!!?!??????!??????!?!?\
Well what can i say your story is like a drug and i need more upate soon darling or might have to pay you a little visit, dont test my ninja-isms.lol jk jk, but really dont make me come over there ad watch you type. this next chapter needs to pop up here something quick, cus your killing me here. so till then or if i pay you a visit (evil grin) i shall wait for the next chapter.
KAR
AAAHHHH!!!! Who ruined the moment?!?!? And where's that 'next' button?!?!?
*wimper* Please update soon.
Another cliffie? They were so close!!!
OMG! That was too funny. I've not read about that happening to Sess before. Oooo... poor guy. :P Can't wait to see what happens next.
Kar (Chapter 24) - Sun 31 Jul 2011
LOL rin tried to make light of the situation and sesshy wasnt happy with it. i cant beleive all that happened, of course kagome has to be clumsy somewhere in the story lol
that was great. im a waiting the next chapter
so till then
KAR
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