this was a good story. i liked how kikyo and kagome got along in this one. the way you wrote them was a good change of pace for me. i like it when they are written this way. these two dont always have to be enemies. i hope you can take the time to finish your others stories. i would like to read them. making hojo the bad guy was diffent too. i found him to be a bit creepy in the anime as well. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
Ok everything seems to be changing. Kagome's eyes were light brown now they are blue. inupapa's name has change from Inutaishio to Toga, and neither can be his last name since u already said it was Tenshi. Kahome already met Nakuru but in a later chapter it seemed like the office was their first meeting. Kagura was suppose to be a brides at the wedding but later when you put her as Sesshomaru's ex wife. Rin is their daughter and in the beginning you made her seem like she was kikiyo family cause kagome seemed to know her despite only meeting her way later. There are many other discrepancies but to be honest I LIKE THEM!! but the story isnt consistent maybe u should change a few thing in the earlier chapters to match the later ones
Good Story so far. However most of it is redundant. There is no need to tell us the story twice or three times. All you needed to do was say Kagome reiterated the tale to Sango then tell us her response. It get annoying after a while when you repeat so much. Im not trying to be mean or I would say it is a bad story. I am just giving advice
Rhonda (Chapter 32) - Sun 03 Jan 2016
Hope your Holidays and New Years were awesome!!
And Thank You for such a great read! I truly LOVE how you wrote Inupapa. Great balance to the story and awesome character development. Truly enjoyed reading every bit of it!
Thanks again for a great getaway.....
"why couldnt it be follow the butterflies?" hahahahaha
I sincerely hope that was some sort of HP reference or I am just an idiot
This story was amazing and I enjoyed it, Happy New Year!
Alashia (Chapter 32) - Sat 02 Jan 2016
Yeah! What a beautiful ending! I've enjoyed this story so much!
Such a good wrap up to this story. Loved it
Nice, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Nice, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Aww (: I'm glad she's getting excited about it!
Fluff is always good!
Saiya (Chapter 30) - Mon 14 Dec 2015
Hehehe So Adorable.
Looooove!!!!
Mona (Chapter 28) - Tue 08 Dec 2015
Awesome, I am looking forward to the updates to come.
Yayyyy puppies!!!
Ahaha how embarrassing XD
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