Freaking. Awesome. 

Wow. That was twisted. I love the way you made her make him realise that he was the one who was 'wrong', and not her. It's not often that authors write Kagome like this. You gave just enough detail instead of throwing mountains of it at the reader, which I really liked. <3

I thought this was really good! Sad, but really good! :) Thanks for writing! :D

Omg girl you kicked ass on this one!!! The idea that he went and KILLED all of her reincarnations until she finally stopped him and let him know how he caused her pain through the centuries and to make him see that HE was the defective one not her.. awesomeness. The ways he killed them was insane and crazy good.

SP

That was so fantastically twisted. I didn't feel that it was rushed and I think more detail would have been too much. In this case, so much detail would have detracted from the story, after all, it wasn't about how he found and killed her each time, but about the consequences of his actions once he did finally find the "perfect" Kagome. I loved her poisoning him and remembering all the pain from her past lives' deaths. Every once in awhile I like a trajedy, something that doesn't end happy ever after. Too often I don't like the results; Kagome always seems too weak, too easily pushed around, and Sesshy never gets what's coming to him. That didn't happen in this story, even with her being killed so often. She finally was able to live long enough to get back at him and show his own faults! 

I - what. I mean I kill characters all the times, so I have no problem with reading it, but I actually thought it wouldn't happen. Darn. I mean its not a bad darn its a omg-my-heart-poor-thing darn. If ... yeah. Ahah. It doesnt make much sense. SHHH! 

This was wonderful writing, I mean, each words seemed to add to the atmosphere, and seriously I cringed more than once. Not cause it was bad, but cause I was like oh dear something bad is coming- I cannot- I have to! I feel like crying. Which is great, I love when a story comes reaches to me and just takes hold of my emotions!

OMG That was just awesome! I don't know what to say other than awesome.

D: SAD! -cries- Poor Sesshomaru! Poor Kagome! I don't know what else to say, just -cries for them both-

i'm not sure what to say. that just leaves me all :\

You know, Naq, I don't know what it is about this second round in the tourney, but this is the second story out of the three I've read for said tourney, involving these two killing each other somehow. And none of them was necessarily out of hatred, but just a situation gone wrong and being misunderstood. lol. Still, can I say... I wasn't expecting a character death? Especially Sesshoumaru's? I never thought Kagome would have it in her, but if all her past lives pain had followed her into that present life, I assume I would understand. But... wow. Just wow. I did like it though, don't get me wrong. Just very unexpected and yet, sort of refreshing. We don't see this side of Kagome in a lot of fanfics out there. This is going in my faves for sure. Good job!

4 some reason to me Kagome was like 'back attcha mother@%$#er' - lol

anyway, loved the tragedy and ur play on how Kagome died in Sess' arms in the beginning and vise versa at the end....oh yeah without seeing the prompt, that line with 'peanuts' cracked me up.

Very nice, naq! I really enjoyed it despite it feeling a little bit rushed. I would have loved more detail and interaction in his encounters. It's understandable though, since you didn't have much time =)  I was expecting something a bit more bloody at the end, so I was pleasantly surprised when you used poison.

I'm so glad I could help you! Now, I'm off to try and write my own entry, haha. 

This is, well, not exactly lovely per se (they killed each other after all), but good, really really good. And so tragic. In the end, everyone is defective. I loved it.

And, I'm gonna vote as soon as I get my dear computer back from the evil clutches of my little baby brother, this laptop refuses to log me in.

~lily

<3's!!! Wow, what a great idea!

So awesome!!!! I love this, it's so.... captivating for the lack of better word. I can't describe how it made me feel. 

*raises hat* truly wonderful author. 

And you were worried... tch... this was lovely. Just as I knew it would be!