What YOU killed off Miroku!!! How will Kagome play superhero without her faithful toy maker O.O  

Anyways you've sucked me into this story quight well I commend you ^-^

hoping for updates ^-^

Nyuka

Wow! This was a roller coaster of emotions! and the end, maybe you saw it coming but, you were in it. You felt the desperation, the "you can't breath anymore" crisis. I love the way you wite. Hope to see soon an update! good luck!

i didn't expect it to go this way, i thought she'd avoid him for as long as possible. :o

I'm giddy with excitement, thinking about their meeting at the park. ;D Thank you for the chapter.

i thought it was abit funny, and the way the story flowed, i thought sesshomaru and kagome were gonna try and avoid eachother and wont meet eachother for a bit. But it came out awesomely, lol, I also like the end when you made the whole newspaper piece title with your beta. It made me giggle. I hope to read more ^^

Awesome chapter! I just love the tone of the story while its action packed it still has a light humourous undertone because of the strained relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome :) Love the chapter as well I can't wait to see what the two will do to each other in their meeting!

Ohohoho what will happen next? The plot's progressing well. :)

-snickers at deleted scene- You should make those a regular thing.

Smo..... You genius @.@ You crazy Genius @.@ -stalks the story- 

Wow. That was amazing. I can't wait to see the next chapter! You have me wondering about how you're going to progress. What will Kagome do now that her identity has been revealed?

What an astounding chapter! Omg. I love the tension between the two, especially when Sesshomaru shot Kagome. Thank you for updating.

SMO!! You have made this Kayelyn one very happy girl! Unfortunately, I need more. MORE, I tell you! Squuuueeeeee! 

-dances madly-

Update soon, Lovely!

The level of detail in your story is fantastic and the pacing is good too.  I really hope you are able stay with this story because it is very good.  I can't wait to see how Kagome and Sesshomaru's next meeting goes.  I would think that Sesshomaru has already dug into her past and knows what happened with her family.  Watching him reconcile the Priestess being his editor Kagome is going to be great.  I imagine when Koga finds out he'll just have a bigger stiffy for her ;)

love it! can´t wait for the next update

Yay, a new chapter. :3

Wow, that was an epic chapter. Really makes me wonder what will happen next. Please update soon! I really can't wait to find out what Sesshoumaru will do now that Kagome's secret has been revealed. 

Wow! It was action packed! My nose was literally up against the compute screen reading it word for word, you had me hanging of each word lady! It was awesome!!!! Loved the fight and I can't wait to see what's goingto happen in the next chapter. Great scene you made it seem so life like.

More, Smo! I.NEED.MORE....please? I really need to thank Lilli for turning me on to this.

Man this is turning out to be really good. i can't wait for the next chapter.:D

Nice nice! somehow, I can picture this happening, though I have to warn you about this: you rush too much through some of the descriptive parts and it's sometimes really confusing. Like the description of Sesshomaru: until the third chapter, you mentioned nothing about his looks, or I was too distracted to notice anything. Second, if he can blend in, hiding his aura from Kagome, then how come he doesn't change his eye color. I mean, no human can have honey orbs. He would have been discovered long ago if he didn't hide his eyes.

Either than that, the fact that Naraku got to Kagome's place so fast without knowing a name or profession is a mystery. Usually, things like that take at least two days not two hours, so this part is quite wrong even for a demon-filled story. I mean, they have to obey human laws and such and as far as I know there isn't a demon that can provide the spider hanyo such info on such a short notice.

Hm... that is that with the not-so-positive review. Now with the positive part: I have to say that this is one of the most captivating stories I have read so far. You have it all from angst  to love to hate to betrayal... oh! the Dramaaaaa! T^T

I wonder when those two will be together, because you have to put them together at some point right? :)) I would at least :))

You have quite the interesting plot there. original and amusing ^^

Keep up the good work, love :D I'm cheering for you! ^^

Argh. It logged me out when I tried to review, not sure WHY. Anywhozizzles, I was right! Boy is he PO-ed. And Naraku's following Kags. Ooh dear. This is turning out verrry interestingly.