Oh...wow. That was both terrifying and heartbreaking all at the same time. Very well done.
Wow...
that was creepy and twisted. Poor kikyou, brainwashed with the idea that protecting someone means locking them up. (At least, that's what i gathered? Or am i wrong?)
that was a good end to the story, albeit i wanted to know what happened to those Fortune children and what will happen to kagome's child. I mean, how will she give birth alone with kikyou? I don't think common sense runs in their family. Maybe that's why they needed artificial luck.
Anyway, great story, so haunting...
Hm makes me wonder if Sesshomaru could "borrow" some power to release himself from the bond they forced on him? Why didn't Kikyo try to save him since her sister loves him too?
But very good and angsty story.......great job!
Purple (Chapter 8) - Wed 29 Oct 2014
I feel like I've been stalking your work for years and I've never been disappointed. This story truly takes the cake. Spine tingling, decadent emotions, and just enough unanswered questions to leave me riveted. Bravo and thank you so much for sharing your talent.
Ah dang. That was one he'll of an ending. I'm still freaked out. Gosh. Okay I'm good now. That was wicked good. I'm glad it is done now. Can't wait to see what you crank out next!
I have enjoyed this story greatly it's quite sad however while it's listed as complete it feels as if it's unfinished. I most certainly would have loved to find out what Kikyo's plans for Kagome were. If Kagome ever figures a way out of the attic, and what happens to Sesshomaru or their child.
Koree (Chapter 8) - Wed 22 Oct 2014
D; Wait There Isn't More Whyyyyyyyy ): This Story Is Amazing , No Sequel ?
Ah, I remember this fic. I'm so glad you got the time to finish it. Such a wonderful twist!
I'm still waiting on your sequel to "The Summoned".
Zoku (Chapter 8) - Fri 17 Oct 2014
Wow! What a great short fic!! I really enjoyed it :D And, it felt really new, which is hard to come by after years of reading SessXKag! Well done!
This story was great and i enjoyed it! I hope there's a sequel, the ending left more to tell.
jk (Chapter 8) - Fri 17 Oct 2014
That's it. I was waiting what sesshomaru would do. I feel it can have sequel and feel its not finished yet. plz write a sequel to this i was waiting what next.
I've actually seen the movie you based this off of so when you mentioned it I was expecting it to be closer to the movie. I am very glad it's almost nothing like the movie. So I'm very interested in all the twists and changes that you've put in your story. I have to say you are one of my favorite authors- fanfiction or otherwise- so I'm ecstatic that you are a novel writer. I can't wait until the next chapter.
I don't think it was boring, and you were still preggers the last time you updated so i understand the wait, worth it too. But is this the end? It feels like one, it's not like she can ceremony stalk him from branch to branch for the rest of her life. And that didn't look like mating so i don't know what's up. Can't wait to see what happens though.
Delcena (Chapter 7) - Fri 15 Mar 2013
I was so enthralled by this story, that I was upset when it ran out of chapters
I absolutely love this fanfic. As you've said you have been super busy with your career writting (congrats and goodluck by the way!!!) so i would like to thank you very much for taking your time to update this fic!!!! & no the lemmon was'nt awful. :)
Loveyaa (Chapter 7) - Thu 14 Mar 2013
Parting is such sweet sorrow. Such a unique and kinda weird relationship. They have stolen moments together, and yet are so close. I wonder if they will let Kagome keep the baby, or what happens if she doesn't get pregnant? Will they bring him back then? And what will become of Kikyo. Im so glad you came back, but there is still so much before our happy ending. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Great update, great lemon. Very angtsy, I feel so bad for Kikyo and Sesshoumaru. Can't wait to find out what happens next, please update soon!
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh.....happy happy...an update....although i have to say that i ask myself what might have happened to all of sesshoumarus children...i have to admit that i kinda forgot some details of this story-----sorry ------ i think i might have to re-read it again.... X3
....it would be great if kagome could delude her family into believing that she will do whatever they want from her...and from her baby.....and then she's going to kick their a**** XD
maybe she would be able to get sesshoumarus children on her side to free him as well XD ....i do wonder...are they're going to let kikyou out of her prison, now that seemingly her role in this game is over ( with sesshoumaru moving to another branch of the family)?
aaaaaaaaaaargh....please update soon XD
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