I love love love! this story. I am so glad to see that you are continuing this story. It is one of your best ones. I know it might ruin the surprise however is the 'Demon Twin' Inuyasha in his uncontrolled state? Just wanted to say that I reallly enjoy your work and this story:)

I'm hooked lol! I love this it's so funny~! I can't wait for more :-)

aww i can already feel kikyo's bitchiness coming.   sesshoumaru and kagome have already formed a bond and he hasnt even spoken yet,  imagine hjow shit will hit the fan when the bitches  (kikyo and kaede)  find out kagome helped a demon, but oh well. i cant wait for the next chapters  so please dont forget!  haha love it and please continue

Great story, keep it coming.

WOW!

You definitely showed up and showed out for my challenge, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!

I like the originality of this--even though you're doing a crossover type thing, this still reads like an original plot, and I LOVE it! The humor is there, the mystery is there, and you have me totally hooked! I like how you made Kaede more of a mentor than a grandmother figure, and Kikyo's haughty attitude is very well written.

If I have any criticism, it's that you had a few misspellings and dropped words. I would suggest writing your story in Microsoft Word if you don't already and using the built in spell check before uploading.

Other than that, you've done an awesome job! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Thanks again for entering!

~Aubrey

Another new story! :)

I love How to Train Your Dragon and I love this story so far too!

hey :D

First of all, thank you for your kind review. It warmed up my heart to know that you like it, when you obviously write so well yourself. I am quite impressed and whelmed by your idea. It's original and fallows the idea of the movie, so good job on that. You have a few misspelled words and typing thingies, but those are minor, though they tend to get a bit annoying as I neared the end of your chapter.

Second, you used "kame" in your dialog. Kame means frog, turtle in japanese. Kami is the correct version, which means god.

Either than that, I want to read more from you, so I will begin my long journey soon. I just had to review your story. I liked it <b>that</b> much. XD I can't wait to read your next chapter. In comparison with your story, mine is... meah... unimportant and not at all interesting. It kind of lacks... that special thing your story has ^^

So, good job and good luck in the future. Something tells me that your story is going to be one of the best I had read so far (and I read a lot XD)

Thank you for this piece of ART!!!

~Lory