...I wrote that last review before I read your "About Me" thingymadoo. I think I love you as much as I love the story, and I'll make you a deal. You keep writing this story, and I'll make sure to let you know if there are any grammar problems in it. Sound good? =D Oh, and sorry about reviewing twice... I had to. I wouldn't be able to go to sleep if I didn't.
Thingamadoo... Wasn't that fun to say? =P
HOLYMOTHEROFSWEETBABYJESUS!
I'm in love. No, no, you don't understand. I'M IN LOVE. I have NEVER reviewed on this website until now (due to my overwhelming laziness), and I'm reviewing for you now. I love where this is going, and it's making me curious! I've been lurking for maybe a month now, and I'm excited about this story! It's something that I haven't quite seen before, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. There were only very minor errors that were most likely just overlooked, and I applaud you for that. =] Grammatical errors are one of my pet peeves, and honestly, no matter how good the reviews are, if I get through the first chapter and can't concentrate on the stories because I'm too busy editing it, I'll stop reading it then and there. Maybe even the first paragraph... Depends on how I'm feeling that day. Today, I'm not too forgiving. lol I've kicked a couple of stories off my list today already...
Anyway! Amazing start! I'm really looking forward to the rest! And don't mind my little rant above. That whole grammar mess doesn't apply to you, my dear! You're a Grammar Angel! =D
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!! *squeal all fangirl like*
More? More! More... More? MOOOOOORE! :D More, please! :)
One word, no two: Amazing! MORE!
0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o *gives you moony eyes* :3 more please ^_^
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