it was really good.... but i think it went to fast. just some helpful critisism.....
Part two?
Ooooo, very interested as too what will happen in chapter 2. I was a bit confused at one point as to whose point of view we were reading from, but I figured it out! :DUpdate soon plz!!! xoxox
Oooo I'm liking this DQ! Can't wait to get to the juicy part! ;)
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