So excited, hope to read more soon. Thanks.

I'm so anxious waiting for more of your story... You have left me in suspense. Hope to read more soon, but until then I will just continue to reread the story. Thanks.

Before you update you need to go back and reread your chapters and edit or find someone to do it for you.

This whole chapter doesn't make very good sense. You have words where they don't belong and you don't have complete sentences either.

                                   Your grammer sucks.

You are either forgettings or you're typeing faster then your mind can keep up, because the first paragraph of this chapter is in need of editing.

Your first chapter at the end needs editing too, by the way.

I'm not trying to be mean, but didn't your teachers in school teach you to review, edit when needed, then put the finish copy out for people to see [read].

I mean I was tought this stuff in elementary school for just doing reports. By time I reached High School I taught that you review your own work then turn a correct copy over to someone I trust to review again to see if I missed anything then typed up a finished copy to hand in.

I absolutely love your story. I hope you update again soon. Keep up the good work thanks.

you should make ayame punish koga and jakotsu and have ayame and rin mate (when she is a year older of course) Jakotsu should be the pregnant one and you should make it where its been quite a few years or whatever it be kinda cool

This was the 1st time I've ever read this entire story (even though I know the story isn't complete) and left reviews. I'm glad Kagome decided not to try to go through the well 1 last time to say goodbye to her family.The reason I'm glad that she made that choice is because, as long as the Jewel allows her to stay in the past and live happily mated to the 2 Inu brothers then when she sees her family again in 500yrs,her family will think she's only been gone days and for the 500yrs it takes until she sees them again, she won't age but she'll be busy having children with Sessh & Inu and bringing up a family of their own. I can't wait to read more of this story because there are so many things I want to know.

This story is different  and very unique in some ways and I really enjoy it. I wonder what will happen with the jewel. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I enjoyed this chapter but it reminded me of what I was thinking before about whether certain youkai mate for life. When Sessh was thinking about how Inu had touched his d--k to remove it from Kagome,Sessh thought about the fact that in the past he'd had sex with both men and women and he didn't think Inu had ever been with both a man and woman before and he decided that it was an issue that would have to be brought up in the future.I know that both Inu and Sessh know that Kagome was pure (a virgin) before they both took her in the cave. I realize that I don't know if just Kagome is mated to Sessh and mated to Inu or if all 3 of them are mated to each other and I don't know if Inu's mate for life.  I know the 3 of them have sex together or maybe it's better described that both males have sex with her at the same time? Kagome doesn't seem to have a problem experimenting with the 2 and because she comes from the future where sex is where more open,I doubt she'd be disgusted if her mates touched or fooled around with each other while they were all having sex together... She may have been a virgin in body but knowledge wise she'll probably shock them with some of the ideas she could come up with(haa haa),I'd love to see them in shock.

 I am wondering( and worrying) if Inu's mate for life in this story, so Kagome won't have to always fear that her 2 mates will either be out cheating on her or looking to find and/or bring another female mate into their life? I do hope that Kagome's senses become stronger so she could smell the things that her mates can smell and I think it would be helpful for Kagome to take care of her pups if she was to gain some Inu instincts (like increased scent to know what's wrong with her pups or mates,increased hearing so she could hear if her pups were in trouble and increased speed to get to them and save them in time..but I imagine thats up to the jewel or if she changes physically from being mated to one extremely powerful Inu daiyoukai & one powerful Inu-hanyou..I just can't imagine how scary it would be to have to worry about her pups and not have the ability to understand or help them)When I was thinking of whether or not Inu's mate for life and don't cheat (I was hoping that if they mate for life than the fact the brothers mated her at the same instant would cause an unbreakable bond between the 3) I think that if either male was ever with another female or if Kagome thought, felt or found out that they'd been when another or that they wanted to add another female to what they have, I believe Kagome would be broken hearted and never trust them again. I wouldn't be surprised if she took her pups,ran and jumped through the well and sealed it.

     I'm sorry this is such a long review and I will try to be more careful in the future.   

I like this story so far but are Kouga and Jakotsa mated (even though they are both males)? I wondered because it seemed like they both wanted to have more beings involved in their relationship (sexually). I can imagine that some youkai mate for life, maybe some youkai can have as many mates as they want and some youkai can have a mate but also have a harem. That makes me wonder what the mating rules are for wolves, Inus,wind witches (like Kagura) and  other youkai. Is Jakotsu a human or youkai in this story? I can't wait to read more.

There are alot of spelling errors and grammar mistakes in each chapter but the story is still very interesting. I am curious about where Shippo is since he hasn't been mentioned so far.

This is good story. I am enjoying it but be careful about the tense of some of your words. Can't wait for next update.

I really like your story. However there are a few errors. I notice that sometimes you leave out a word or two. I tend to do that myself. I get to typing so fast that I don't pay attention. Maybe you're haviing the same problems. Other than that It's really good story.