Ohmagod Naq! I loved it! I'm totally craving a lemon for it now though.... >_> -stalks you for lemon-
Clearly, she had come some way ahead from the frantic flames of the usual hater! <---I love this line too. Made me giggle. Lots of the story did really, but this line stuck for some odd reason. Anyway, wonderful job lil lady! <3
ZOMG, just when I think I've read your best, you outdo even YOURSELF!!! THis was brilliant, amazing, awesomely funny, believeable, and just plain AWESOMESAUCE!! Gah, I'm overdoing the superlatives, I know, and managing to be redundant at the same time, but I really cannot find the words to express how TERRIFIC I think this is. You soooooooooo ROCK!
:D
~~me~~
PS - I can't even winnow out just a few of my fave lines... there were too many!!
I really liked this piece and I'm voting for you! It was pretty funny that he broke in to her house and melted the book right in front if her and I also liked that he later was so perceptive of her feelings for him. :)
Happy New Year!
One that barks!?
I laughed! That was great
Ohhh, Naq! This was so good!!
Luna (Chapter 1) - Thu 29 Dec 2011
soooooooooo cute!! and omg, I'm still laughing my ass off. "Arf!" Indeed!
haha that was funny, great job! And srsly if i were Sessho i'd kill her to for turning him into a fluff ball LOL. Awesome dude!
Madison (Chapter 1) - Thu 29 Dec 2011
GAAAAAH.
I liked. Ahah. I think it was a really good idea to get Kagome to write those stories. And Hojo as her editor, I mean, poor guy, he's never going to take a hint, lmao! I especially enjoyed when Sesshomaru turns into a night stalker-book melter. Ahah! Hey, he's out of luck since Kagome does not get scared that easily, lol! The barking part was freaking hilarious lol and then she admitted her feelings, ~awe that was cute!
Now, I can picture them cooperating together and writing the Feudal Era. Which is superb because Sesshomaru should totally be more of a teen idol than Edward, ahah!
Seriously this was cute, funny and adorable. Three things, I cannot do! :)
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