i feel like crying for them. very emotional chapter.
i can't tell you enough how much i love reading this fic. can't wait for the next one! ^-^
The first part of the chapter was so sweet and touching, the middle was very sexy, yet touching too. You show their love for each other so well. The the end, wow! That was powerful, and exactly what would have happened in real life. Poor Sesshy and Kagome, they are going to go through hell. Hopefully, the stress won't hurt their pup or their love.... Write more soon, please. Make the story as long as you can, it's wonderful.
Kitty (Chapter 13) - Fri 02 Oct 2009
I have been waiting for a update on this story forever. I am so addicted to this story. Please update very very soon. I can't wait to read more.
Kitty (Chapter 12) - Fri 04 Sep 2009
| I can not tell you how much I LOVE your story. It's like a book you can't set down. PLEASE update soon.
serasvictoria666 (Chapter 12) - Fri 04 Sep 2009
| Absolutely wonderful!!! i can't wait to read the rest of it! ^-^
stars (Chapter 12) - Thu 03 Sep 2009
| please updata
| A new chapter! I'm so pleased. And such an eventful one too. You are really good at conveying emotion, the stress and anxiety of the situation these two are in. They ARE both very young, in human terms. They're going to have to do some growing up, now! Are they going to come clean with their father? Are they going to run away? I can't wait to find out!
| Wow, I remember reading this a long time ago...it was on A Single Spark I believe, but anyway, I thought it was a really good storyline. You made it believable. I was so happy to find that you did decide to finish it. I'm sure you'll get so many new readers loving it too. I'll be looking forward to the next update to see how they'll handle things when Daddy and her Mom find out. Maybe there's another condo/apartment in Saniko's building if push comes to shove between them and their family. Great to see this back. JEN
| Wow, that was an interesting twist, though not completely surprising. And now how are they going to hide this from their parents? Or are they? I am intrigued to see where you take this story...
| Wow, what a story. Please update soon, I am intrigued with how things are progressing.
lady M (Chapter 8) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
| omg i love this story please bring it back its soo good to me thank you for writing it and reading my comment
idon'thaveausername (Chapter 10) - Tue 30 Sep 2008
| I love this story! If anyone knows of other stories like it could you please leave a response review of the title of the story and where I can find it. Haiden I hope you review as fast as you can. I am thankful you decided to share this story with the Dokuga community.
| So gooood! Beyond amazing, really. I can't wait to read the next one!
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
| Wow! That was intense. This was a very satisfying lemony chappie. I wonder what will happen in the morning when everything finally Kagome and she realizes that she mated her brother... Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P
| I love this story - twisted enough to keep ya reading, well enough imagined to keep the pictures of the house, the grounds, everything going in your mind long after you've read it. Very memorable. I likes it a lot.
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