Aw... I'm all teary eyed. ThisI was simply lovely!
What a beautiful story; you explored the variety of emotions experienced in a relationship with wonderful mastery - I truly believed Kagome's heartache and sympathised. Your handling of Sesshoumaru's character was superb - he endured but adapted. You write in such a way that I often feel entranced by your work, and, once again, you have proven yourself to be a sublime writer with an engaging plot that wasn't dragged out unneccessarily - you managed to convey so much emotion in so few chapters. Thank you for sharing another little gem with us m'dear.
~ Aimee
toon town (Chapter 4) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.!
Reader in Disguise (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
This was such an excellent story! It's amazing how you managed to craft it in just 4 chapters! It almost feels like a longer story!
Thank you for writing such agreat tale!
wudelfin (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Jan 2012
now that was a lovely ending!
It's complete! (*^*)
The ending was so sweet. :D They finally reconciled.
Lonelylulaby (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Jan 2012
That was beautiful, just beautiiful
Selazul (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Jan 2012
Aww such a perfect story! damn her impatient impulsiveness leaving fluffy all alone like that .
Oh, this was beautiful and wrenching, Luna! I loved every minute of it, and how easily you made it evident that the dog was Sesshoumaru, but still managed to filter through certain changes that must have occurred to him through the years. And that line "horizontally, vertically, diagonally" just made me laugh! As did that scene of Kagome suddenly flirting with her bathroom mirror! All I could think was, "Bet Sess is loving the eye candy he's getting!"
This has to be one of your best yet! Ingeniously simple and emotional.
TKE (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Jan 2012
that was amazing!!!!!
I feel sad for Kagome, but I am in awe of Sesshomaru. AWWW...He took care of her when she was drunk. How sweet. Can hardly wait to quench my curiousity about how Kagome will react once she finds out the truth. ;*)
Deana (Chapter 3) - Tue 24 Jan 2012
Another awesome chapter. I take it that Sesshoumaru can change into his humanoid form after all how woukd he get the aspirin out of the bottle without msking s mess(he! he!). Can't wait for next update.
Selazul (Chapter 3) - Tue 24 Jan 2012
Update! Update! Update!!! You've long ago gotten me hooked!! Please update more soon!!
Lillian (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Jan 2012
This story is like my favorrrrriteeeeeee it's sooo cute~~~~~~~
just like you ^.^
Deana (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Jan 2012
Excelleny story! Can't waitfor the next update. I'm wondering though will Sesshoumaru tell her who he really is and if he'll regain his humanoid form.
AWWWW...)';
I'm so glad that Kagome accepted Souta for what he is: gay. Some people don't like gays, lesbians, and bisexuals(no wonder half the population won't confess it). So happy to see that she is so loving towards others. ( ; Thank you for the update. XD
Noacat (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Jan 2012
First of all, I want to say that this story is fantastic. Secondly, as someone who has a sister that's gender queer, I want to thank you for writing a gay character that isn't a stereotype. You handled the subject in a really realistic and mature way, and it's really just the best thing ever. I've seen other authors try to tackle it and then end up accidentally being super offensive, so it's nice to see it done well. LOVE!
Aww! How adorable! I love this story line! Sesshoumaru as a dog is so cute! <3
Lydia (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Jan 2012
I really like this and curious why Sesshoumaru is in dog form. I wonder if he will get his humanoid form back. Well... so many questions! Love it!
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