sesshomaru devio' de salvar a kagome que susedera cuando la familia real sepa de los latigasoa ocurridos a su prinsesa y la foma quela an umillado
Sesshy is a punk!
OMGGGGGGG that was intense! I hope Kagome gets revenge against all of them! That stewardess is a bitch!
OH KAGAI NEEDS TO GO SOMEWHERE!!!! And hopefully Miroku, Sango and the royal family will realize that Kagome is alive and in the palace before it is too late. Please update soon and dont disappear anymore it made me sad =(
Keep it coming.
When are they gonna find out that Kagome is the true princess of the East??? I can't wait for that moment! I do like the build up though, so take your time, lol. Thanks for the update :)
Woohoo, great chapter!!!
Yay, you updated! Ooh, we (or rather Miroku and friends) are coming closer to unraveling the mystery :) Can't wait to find out what will happen next and what Kagai will do!
You're welcome by the way :)
Oooh So much is happening. Now that miroku has discovered the secret, Sesshoumaru is almost on the cusp of unravelling the mystery behind Kagome's supposed death. And not to mention Kagai's jealousness. One wonders how it will manifest itself, will she provide obstacles to Kaggies training or secretly help her in topping the exams considering the results of the latter will make Kagome out of Sesshou's reach....Oooh so many options, I'm sooo hooked to this fic. Update soon pls!
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Voracious
I'm really enjoying this story (as everyone else is, I'm sure). Thanks for updating.
Oh, how gruesome. :/. But, wait till he finds a perfect Kagome in the ground, with no sign of decomposing! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Teehee, the story unfolds. Short, but good enough to keep readers satisfied :D
I was a bit annoyed by the fact that you mess around with the verb tenses all the time though, for example:
"“Yes, your Highness.” Confounded, Miroku raced towards the stables of the Palace. Something was not right, something was definitely out of place. Soon enough, he’ll know."
The last bold word should be : he would know, since you seem to write mainly in the simple past. Just a head's up and something to take into account when writing, because otherwise your writing is quite enjoyable, just the juggling of tenses putting me off a bit.
Oh dear, things are now starting to get really exciting :D
Loved it!!!!! But sesshomaru would be able to tell if mioku was lying and he knows this. But I guess Jyunchi did a number on Sesshomaru's trust can't really blame him. So on that note PLEASE!!!!! Update soon
Thanks for the update!!
Uh oh! What could this mean?! In very excited to see what happens!
Keep it coming,
aw, poor miroku! but hopefully both him and sango will find out that kagome is alive!
I love your update so much I don't think it needs to be edited! Thanks for the update by the way! I just found this story again and am totally sucked in again! Please update when ever you can! Your doing a wonderful job~ :-)!
Nice chapter. Every update is appreciated. Update soon!
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