Good story! I think they are all still IC. I, also, would love to see a stronger Kagome to topple Sesshoumaru off that pedistal. Boy's holding his nose so high in the air, he'd drown in a rain storm. :P
Can't wait for more!
Your portrayals are awesome! But I would LOVE to see Kagome stand up to Sesshoumaru! If she can stand up to an out-of-control Inuyasha, why not a jerk-some Sessh?!I'm totally looking forward to some more updates!!! This is an awesome fic!! Thanks for sharing it!!
I believe that you've gotten better at writing, too. Although, your previous writing was awesome, somehow, you've managed to up even that. LOL. Thank you for the lovely chapter.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. You kept Sesshoumaru very much in character. Good job!
Good chapter. Shippo's so right when he describes the brothers. Would love to see Sess get knocked down a few pegs and realize he needs her.
please uptdate soon
I enjoyed this very much! Especially the interaction between Kagome and Sesshomaru towards the end of the chapter in terms of both being in character. In many fics, I found that their views of each other changed far too quickly to be believable. You got their feelings for each other spot on.
Can't wait to read more!
For such a long worded chapter nothing really happened. Kagome through a childish fit thats pretty much it. She said that matured in her time here but she throwing hissy fits and pouting and shouting 'i hate you'. Hmmmm matured indeed :p I fee like she is still 15 if not 14 in this story. How old is she supposed to be?
Awesome chapter! I love the detail you put into the character's feelings. It really gives incite into what they are feeling. I really hope that Inuyasha doesn't go all angry crazy person on everyone because of his pent up anger. That would really suck.
Very nicely done! I cannot wait for the next update!
Great chapter, please update soon.
Oh lord, Inuyasha is jealous! Haha. Sesshomaru is such a booty. I say that in a good way, of course. Lol. Thank you for the lovely update.
I adore how very upset Inuyasha is at the unconscious caring attitudate and purposeful physical care Kagome is showing his half-brother. It is VERY realistic to how I think it would happen. He would hate it but he is a good enough person to not want to truly hurt Kagome over it. I think you capture this well. Sesshomaru's haunty enjoyment at the half breeds distress is also quite realistic. Even siblings that love one another can have rivalry issues and these two take the term to extreme. Thank you for sharing this story. It is quite enjoyable to read.
Sesshoumaru is so ungrateful for all Kagome's help. I almost feel like saying that Kagome is too nice for her own good. Nice chapter. Keep up the great work!
Great story, please update soon.
This story is great! Love the IC characters and injured or not, you can't help but want to slap Sesshomaru sometimes...or drool and ogle him. Nicely detailed and great style - thankfully it's not rushed.
Looking forward to your updates!
Yeahhhhhhhh a new chapter!
Poor Kagome....dealing with a such mortal beauty, I've probably had a heartattack!
The wounds are dressed...now I want to see the recover :D ahahahaha and the feeding!
Update soon!! :) and compliment for your style, I like it...
Bye bye!!
Akiko88
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