Very very nice doll. I wanted to let you know that there was a section that you repeated twice. It's too long for me to type it here so you poke at it! (hint: Harder Kagome, suck harder...") ^_^ Thank you for writing this...~Ts
BMI, I love it!!!! OH I especially love the 'this is what heaven looks like, but when i touch her it feels like sin' ooooh that was beautiful!!!!! OH how you taunt and tease. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! ~Ts
Quite an interesting story, I would like to see more, but yeah you need a beta. It'a a little confusing at times.
I like the premise for this stroy... it is intriguing. Would like to see more.
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