Very cute way of writing the story; I must say that your style of writing is delightful. I had to go and find the dictionary a couple of times during the reading process of this fic. -grins- The plot was nice, I've seen variations of the topic at hand but not something like this yet, and the descriotion was good. <3
An amusingly cute and clever tale.
Lyss (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Feb 2012
I greatly enjoyed your story! :) The writing style was very entertaining, unique, and I absolutely loved it!! :D I hope your computer is doing well! I got another blue screen last night... a bit scary! O.o Thanks for writing! :D
Michi (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Feb 2012
Wonderfuly done! I just loved it.
Oh, wow! That was an amazing little story! :D
jhiz (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Feb 2012
very cute... he made her talk, wished her silent, then found the best way to keep her quiet. I liked the little addition of the enjoying her other kinds of noises too. Just a little bit of pervertedness in an otherwise sweet story. Thanks.
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