lol thats funny. I wonder what he's going to do with Shippo. Is this chapter really longer than 500 words? Oh at the bottom, when Sesshoumaru spoke a second time. "I have other activities in mind a younge boy like you should be engaged in." Did you wish to turn it into two sentences?
Example: "I have other activities in mind. A young boy like you, should be engaging in something different then video games."
Oh or you could just:
"I have other activities in mind for a young boy like you."
...Gosh I don't know what it was I was going to write. Nvm. Scratch that, nice run on. I also wish you luck for when you have your classes again.
