Oh I likethe part about the fans being used as a weapon. Many court ladies, maids, etc. carried concealed weapons disguised as hair trinkets, etc. simply because women weren't allowed to carry "real" weapons. Of course, when someone wanted you dead, you still had to protect yourself somehow. Also, there were times in which weapons were not allowed, such as in the presence of royality or at a foreign court. That could get you killed. Please update. I cannot wait to see how Kagome will change "fate" as it were.
Mary (Chapter 6) - Sat 08 Dec 2012
I really love your story so far. It's very creative and well written. I do have a few questions though. In the story you never explained where Kagome got all of her training. If she is advanced enough in weapons to be able to teach and train the Great Inu no Tashio from "boyhood" she must be a master, yet we (readers) have no idea where these skils came from. It seems unlikely that she was able to learn this in her native future time, seeing as those arts would have been long forgotten. I also don't understand why you have put Kagome so far back in the past. Right now she's with Inu no Tashio's father and since we all know that demons live for centuries that means that Kagome will have to live through the rule of Inu no Tashio's father, then through Inu no Tashio's rule and death, then through Sesshomaru's rule up to the point where she went back in time in order to get the story back to where it started. I guess what I'm trying to ask is what is your next move? Is she going to live that long and through all of those years? Is that even possible as a full Inu demon? I was kind of under the impression that this would be a love story between Sesshomaru and Kagome, so I thought she'd be closer to his time. Do you plan to have her jump through the well again so she jumps forward in time? I would love to see her travel around the country some more, maybe learning new skills. That would give her somthing to do. Having her be a master at so many subjects doesn't leave a lot of room for character development. Have you thought about having her spend time with her clan, the black Inus? Or maybe transform back into a human and hone her mikos skills? Or does she not really have miko powers? Was that just a cover-up for her true form?
I'm sorry my review is so long. Please don't feel like I'm attacking your story in any way. I really like it so far!
-Marybella
There are some good twists in here. Can't wait to see more!
Keep it coming.
Wow this is getting very intersting i am having this as my favorite , i cant wait for the next chapter ,.
This story is so cool! You've got to update soon.
Koda (Chapter 4) - Sat 24 Mar 2012
Love it! Please update soon! :)
Koda (Chapter 2) - Sat 24 Mar 2012
loving it so far :)
Give you a heads up that Mother in Japanese is Okaa-san
Bounce (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Mar 2012
This story has a great start and I am very excited about reading more. :D
amy (Chapter 3) - Tue 06 Mar 2012
Please keep up the chappies, More, more...
Venita (Chapter 3) - Tue 06 Mar 2012
Keep it coming.
Venita (Chapter 2) - Thu 01 Mar 2012
Great chapter, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Feb 2012
This story is interesting, please update soon.
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