I read this and I'm confused.
Your story and plot are too unsteady for my taste. I thought kikyo was alive thanks to the wish on the jewel? Did that not mean she no longer needed her soul eaters? Also the characters attitudes change rather quickly. Kikyo went from wanting the best to becoming out right rude. To be honest it feels as though there are chapters missing in the story. It doesn't make much sense With how the characters act. Forgive me if this sounds harsh, but it is only my opinion.
Azarius (Chapter 17) - Mon 26 Aug 2013
This threw off everything and dived in far too quickly. Good part, but it seems so far out if place... Like it should have come later.
The story was amazing and I enjoyed it, I'm wait to read Alpha beta part 2!
Nice ending to part 1. Hopefully, Inuyasha finds a mate of his own when he reaches the castle with his security detail. Maybe Hiko and Yushin have sisters (?) and Inuyasha could mate with one of them as revenge. That would be funny if that happened. Can't wait for part 2.
Isn't she supposed to be pregnant? How's that possible when she's undead? Hmm, more!
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Actually the dungeons sound like the perfect home to inu and kikyo, why hadn't anyone ever thought of that?
I liked the end of this chapter where Inuyasha was saying woe is me! Ha what an idiot!
funny chapter!
Ha ha! Oh that was so funny! Inuyasha got thrown into the dungeon for being a loud mouth dumb ass!
Ha! Ha! It's about time Inuyasha got some kind of punishment other than Kagome's sits! I'm glad that the walking corpse is getting into trouble too. I serves her right for running her mouth!
Lyss (Chapter 14) - Wed 21 Mar 2012
love the story so far! ;) thanks for writing! :D
Lyss (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Mar 2012
lol Love? haha I'm a tad confused - Sango was so angry at first, but now she feels the opposite? xD I look forward to more! :) Thanks for writing! :D
Lyss (Chapter 12) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
Oh, this is such an amusing story!! I love it! :D The way you described their reasoning for picking a miko seemed logical! lol xD Either way, it's funny!! I look forward to future updates! Thanks for writing! :)
Avidreader (Chapter 11) - Sun 18 Mar 2012
Ugh! I KNEW I should have waited until you got to Z! LOL
Nice, like the story and just really started getting into it when...there is no chapter 12 yet -.-
I hope you update soon! ^.^
Venita (Chapter 10) - Wed 14 Mar 2012
Keep it coming.
Venita (Chapter 9) - Tue 13 Mar 2012
Keep it coming.
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