This was painful to read... But I know you were doing it on purpose, so I'm still your fan! I gave up after the first paragraph, but yeah :D Still, I like!
That was terrible!
Ifit wasn't intentional, I think I'd be gagging.
As it was, I will applaud you for your ability to pull anything off.
Bravado!
amy (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Dec 2010
THANK YOU! I LAUGHED UNTIL MY FUNNY BONE HURT< AND COULD NOT BE REPAIRED! YET AGAIN THANK YOU!
Rin (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Nov 2010
XD that was awesome. I couldn't stop laughing. <3
Hikari no Ryuu (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Sep 2010
... too lazy to log in ...
I was laughing the whole time I was reading this, especially when Kagome was referred to as "malady" rather than "milady." I'm curious as to whether that specific intentional-misuse-of-words was intentional... "Malady" certainly seems to fit the way she was characterized here. Almost like a pun.
...
I think.
Anyway, I love! It's so bad it's good! ^-^
mary (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Sep 2010
if i had been drinking, i'd have snorted through the whole thing
Melly (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Jun 2010
Well, this certainly was very entertaining... but oof! Did it win the challenge? I know I'm reading this waaaaay after the fact, but well done on the purposeful aweful awesomeness. I've seen so many of those misplaced puns and misused words, etc., in serious fics, so it's fun to see them all in the same place, haha! Makes me think of the song "Pants on the Ground" by a certian 60 year-old break dancing Americal Idol auditionee... especially in execution. Gah, my head hurts, lol!
@_@
Jules (Chapter 1) - Thu 10 Sep 2009
| AHHHH head hurts. Just the idea of reading it again makes my stomach churn. Its PERFECT!
| This was utterly brilliant. Also hideous. But mostly brilliant.
Tenno-chan (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Aug 2008
| Oh this truly is a wonderful piece! Every error, every misused word was perfect in it's placement, and did not detract at all from the plot. The piece is purely poetic in its flow and design. You, dear author, are a genius worthy of much praise! :D
| Brilliant! I don't know when I've laughed so hard.
Mina (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Jul 2008
| Oh dear, that line about lofty had my 'nickers' in a twist too! Well played!
Rymsie (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Jul 2008
| OMG, wonderful! Too entertaining by far; a great demonstration of wit and humor. You rock!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Jul 2008
| This is hilarious! It reminded me of a horrible play I once had to attend... but at least your effort was entertaining!
Gizmo (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Jul 2008
| Well played. I enjoyed it greatly.
(Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Jul 2008
| Oh Forthy M'dear this was just awful!!! Well Done!!!
Hugs,
LadySafire
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