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nightmareofcat (Chapter 83) - Wed 16 May 2012

*bites nails while sitting on edge of seat*

WHA!?!? thats it omg more more please i beg of you!!

*grovels*

pleeeeaaaaaaaaaaaassssssse!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

the nightmare will return......


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 83) - Wed 16 May 2012

seriously. i REALLY want sess to gut him. like slow evil kinda sess torture


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 82) - Wed 16 May 2012

i really hope that sess puts everythgin he has his time, energy, anger, hate into finding her Ex hubby and ripping him from the world.


Treece (Chapter 80) - Wed 16 May 2012

This is crucial turning point of the story. Im looking forward to how much the hardship has changed Kagome.  And

what happens once th ex-husband learns that she is pregant by Sesshoumaru whne he could not do the job!  Hoo!

He's obviously a punk and loser to beat and abuse a female human.  He also knew what he was doing in his attacks, the mind games he was playing with her.

 

I don't think there will be much left of him when the story comes full circle to the showdown. I hope that Kagome will get

a chance to rip him one. 

 

Ah, I can't wait to see what the next updates will bring.


Loveyaa (Chapter 80) - Tue 15 May 2012

Love can make you do crazy things. I wouldn't know what to tell you bout how to get Kagome through her abusive relationship as believable. I say so far so good. I can't wait to see where things go between Kagome and Sesshoumaru and how everyone else plays a part and prob adds to the drama :)


JeniNeji (Chapter 80) - Tue 15 May 2012

hmnnsnmnsmns, what a complicated moment. I sort of wonder what Sesshomaru thinks of this all...

 

Good job!


dianne (Chapter 80) - Tue 15 May 2012

Ah, kagome is too nice for her own good! :/ 

Haha, I think your doing a great job on the abuse part so don't worry about a thing


nightmareofcat (Chapter 80) - Tue 15 May 2012

wow...... just wow im so glad i finally read this fic, its my own fault i didnt and i very much regret not doing it.

this is amazing and very well done, im very glad i did read it in its entirety.

brilliant absolutely brilliant.

love it, i really do. the way you are portraying kagome, very good.

as a victim of an abusive relationship myself i can relate to her and you are doing an extremely good job of integrating something you dont have experience with, congratulations.

your doing a very nice job with the before and after with her personality, and i can say that i found out that i was pregnant after our relationship ended. i almost feel in a way that you have gotten into my head, the relating is uncanny and almost brings me to tears.

as a victim and a survivor, thank you for being accurate. it means alot to me.

didnt mean to get so personal with the review but i couldnt help it.

please update soon, ill be biting my nails with anticipation.

 

 

 

the nightmare will return......

 


cassandra (Chapter 80) - Tue 15 May 2012

Poor Kagome! She's gone through so much. I hope that she eventually has a happy ending. Update soon


Sesshomaru Bound (Chapter 79) - Tue 15 May 2012

I am really enjoying this story. At first, with how you portrayed Sesshomaru, I wasn't sure I was going to like this, but I am very glad I kept with the story.

I have never been in a physically abusive relationship, though, I have been in an emotionally abusive one. The person makes you feel that all you do is wrong, even when things are out of your control (like Kagome not becoming pregnant). They make you question yourself, your love, your loyalty, all the thoughts and feelings you have, all while making you feel you haven't done enough for them. Though these are one shots, I feel you are doing a good job simply because someone who was explainging their relationship the way Kagome is to Sesshomaru would try to get out as much information as needed, but not more than necessary. She wants Sesshomaru to understand, but she feels she can't open up all the way because he may believe her to be stupid and weak for staying with someone like Jiboro. Forgive me if I am being top presumptious. I really like this story and feel you are doing a good job. Trust your instinct and write what you feel Kagome would feel. You can't go wrong!


Bounce (Chapter 79) - Tue 15 May 2012

I think you are doing a great job with descriptions. I have been in an abusive relationship. Stayed with him for 3 years. I think you are doing a great job with your descriptions of how the relationship went bad. It's kinda like having a flashback....but I am loving this story! You are deffinately talented and I can't wait to see the next update. :)


JeniNeji (Chapter 79) - Tue 15 May 2012

Everything is good! I think... not like I have a lot of experience either ... or well... I dont know. But I think you are doing great :D


JeniNeji (Chapter 78) - Tue 15 May 2012

right... I see you are very pregnant now Kagome. I bet Sesshomaru is all like "Buahahaha! I got her pregnant and you couldnt!" [Must be daiyoukai-sperm-strength] Pff! (I can't believe I thought that, much less that I dare write it. Maybe I'm happy about the updates).


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 79) - Mon 14 May 2012

i think your doing well. i think it needs to be denial before she can accept, then anger, and then fear b/c a crazy guy would want fear ultimately, but i cant see kagome baking down even when totally down trodden. not without some kind of fight. more please!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 78) - Mon 14 May 2012

oh i hope sess gets him! and i'm glad he's finally seeing reason. his passion is a bit scary @_@


dianne (Chapter 77) - Mon 14 May 2012

we're finally getting some answers! :D

I can't believe what a jerk her ex is! I hope some physical harm comes to him XD


JeniNeji (Chapter 77) - Mon 14 May 2012

D: So horrible! That must be a terrible feeling and situation :(


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 77) - Mon 14 May 2012

Very nice, I hope to see more soon.


Loveyaa (Chapter 77) - Mon 14 May 2012

Well that is a lot to take in. There are a lot of emotions for everyone just being flung around but this all is a hard and stressing situation. Maybe Sesshoumaru will be Ble to correctly direct his anger over Rin after Kagome's story. I wonder where things will go from here witheverybody and I do like that we are getting snippets from everybody to put the picture together. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


cassandra (Chapter 77) - Mon 14 May 2012

Aw man! I was getting into it! You gotta update soon!!


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