Haha, I think your doing a great job on the abuse part so don't worry about a thing
wow...... just wow im so glad i finally read this fic, its my own fault i didnt and i very much regret not doing it.
this is amazing and very well done, im very glad i did read it in its entirety.
brilliant absolutely brilliant.
love it, i really do. the way you are portraying kagome, very good.
as a victim of an abusive relationship myself i can relate to her and you are doing an extremely good job of integrating something you dont have experience with, congratulations.
your doing a very nice job with the before and after with her personality, and i can say that i found out that i was pregnant after our relationship ended. i almost feel in a way that you have gotten into my head, the relating is uncanny and almost brings me to tears.
as a victim and a survivor, thank you for being accurate. it means alot to me.
didnt mean to get so personal with the review but i couldnt help it.
please update soon, ill be biting my nails with anticipation.
the nightmare will return......
Poor Kagome! She's gone through so much. I hope that she eventually has a happy ending. Update soon
I am really enjoying this story. At first, with how you portrayed Sesshomaru, I wasn't sure I was going to like this, but I am very glad I kept with the story.
I have never been in a physically abusive relationship, though, I have been in an emotionally abusive one. The person makes you feel that all you do is wrong, even when things are out of your control (like Kagome not becoming pregnant). They make you question yourself, your love, your loyalty, all the thoughts and feelings you have, all while making you feel you haven't done enough for them. Though these are one shots, I feel you are doing a good job simply because someone who was explainging their relationship the way Kagome is to Sesshomaru would try to get out as much information as needed, but not more than necessary. She wants Sesshomaru to understand, but she feels she can't open up all the way because he may believe her to be stupid and weak for staying with someone like Jiboro. Forgive me if I am being top presumptious. I really like this story and feel you are doing a good job. Trust your instinct and write what you feel Kagome would feel. You can't go wrong!
Bounce (Chapter 79) - Tue 15 May 2012
I think you are doing a great job with descriptions. I have been in an abusive relationship. Stayed with him for 3 years. I think you are doing a great job with your descriptions of how the relationship went bad. It's kinda like having a flashback....but I am loving this story! You are deffinately talented and I can't wait to see the next update. :)
Everything is good! I think... not like I have a lot of experience either ... or well... I dont know. But I think you are doing great :D
right... I see you are very pregnant now Kagome. I bet Sesshomaru is all like "Buahahaha! I got her pregnant and you couldnt!" [Must be daiyoukai-sperm-strength] Pff! (I can't believe I thought that, much less that I dare write it. Maybe I'm happy about the updates).
i think your doing well. i think it needs to be denial before she can accept, then anger, and then fear b/c a crazy guy would want fear ultimately, but i cant see kagome baking down even when totally down trodden. not without some kind of fight. more please!
oh i hope sess gets him! and i'm glad he's finally seeing reason. his passion is a bit scary @_@
dianne (Chapter 77) - Mon 14 May 2012
we're finally getting some answers! :D
I can't believe what a jerk her ex is! I hope some physical harm comes to him XD
D: So horrible! That must be a terrible feeling and situation :(
Very nice, I hope to see more soon.
Loveyaa (Chapter 77) - Mon 14 May 2012
Well that is a lot to take in. There are a lot of emotions for everyone just being flung around but this all is a hard and stressing situation. Maybe Sesshoumaru will be Ble to correctly direct his anger over Rin after Kagome's story. I wonder where things will go from here witheverybody and I do like that we are getting snippets from everybody to put the picture together. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Aw man! I was getting into it! You gotta update soon!!
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