I so knew Totosai would forget haha. There was no better way to end that particular adventure :)
I will eagerly be awaiting more of this humorous fairytale.
-E.C.
Aaaww!!! That was a cute ending!! And hilarious.....bahaha
Lol! This story just keeps getting better and better, I can't wait to find out their next quest :)
great start, and i like the characters acting like themselves in an unfamiliar setting. eagerly anticpating more, and more loft Sessy!
I can totally see Sesshoumaru as a cat! He just suits their characteristics perfectly and I loved the part where Kagome fell over with Sesshoumaru sitting on the edge of her dress, I couldn't stop grinning:)
PS21 (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Apr 2012
I really like the way you wrote this story because it sound so much like someone telling a fairytale - except a lot more detailed and entertaining X) Anywayyy I'm really enjoying this expecially how Sesshou doesn't tell her who he is until the end when she finally thinks to ask. Heh, his arrogance makes me smile :D Great job with the characters. I'm really enjoying this.
I loved your art and I'm so happy there's a story to accompany it now. It looks very promising :) Great choice making Totosai the king by the way he's hilarious
cute and interesting so far!! Can't wait to read more. ;)
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