Keep it coming.

Great story I read it yesterday, please update soon.

wow....

I just couldn't stop reading and then ch.4 ended and that is all I can say. The poetry is beautiful and enhances it. It's just... dang. This is a beautiful story.

ZOMG! I somehow missed the Chapter 3 update so I had the pleasure of reading both 3 and 4 in one sitting. This is so wonderful and romantic, especially the end of Chapter 4. You're doing a wonderful job with this story, and I absolutely can't wait to read more!

Wow. Just, wow.

I'm surprised that you don't have more reviews, because you most definitely deserve them. This is one of the most interesting, engrossing fics I've read in a while, and while I don't usually review, I felt the need to do so with this.

I appreciate the thought it must take to put the quotes at the beginning of each chapter, and I love the way that those same quotes give me a sense of what to expect for the chapter. I've always wanted to try something like that, and to see it done so well gives me a wonderful model to strive for.

The pace you set when talking about Kagome is superb. There's tension in her voice, and it's so wonderfully done that I find myself almost holding my breath when I read her parts. I'm so very curious about what's happened to her, and I feel even more curious about Ankoku and Sayomi. Ah, and let's not forget what Ankoku knows about Sesshomaru! I can't help wondering if simply knowing about his fate will make Sesshomaru behave differently with Rin, but I have to admit; I think it would be awesome if nothing he did could change what was supposed to happen.

Anyway, I'll stop my gushing, even though you totally deserve it. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll be waiting anxiously for the next installment!

~Aubrey

p.s. - There was a spot in Chapter 2 - This Life That We Call Our Own, where you had an '&' instead of 'and', so you may want to go back and fix that for flow's sake. There's also a mistake in the Prologue where Kagome says 'breath' instead of 'breathe'.

p.p.s. - If you would like a beta reader, let me know! I would be happy to look over chapters for you to catch little mistakes like the ones mentioned above...not to mention it would be awesome to get the chapter before everyone else! ^_^

Why did they kill Kagome?to what purpose? Is she Sayomi , Did they turn her into one of them? Please continue this to the end, for I must know what happened!

This looks like it's going to be a lot of fun to read! I can't wait to see where you take this ^_^ I love your writing style. It's so light and "to the point". It makes it easy to flow through the story. Great job!

The pacing in the beginning, what I assume to be Kagome's memories, is absolutely wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed reading that part simply for the pace you set.

The rest of the story is quite intriguing so far. I'm curious to know who those two demons are, and why they know Kagome. Why and how did they use the well?

Looking forward to more!