This has started off so good. I can't wait to see what happens.
Kagura's gonna make the switch on emails, soon, isn't she? Ooh, I can hardly wait. *Rubs hands in glee*
Great beginning!! I love your premise here and I can't wait to see what kind of things she accidently reveals to Sesshoumaru. :)
Also, I'm a bit new here. What does DDN stand for?
Pretty good overall, this sentence is really awkwardly worded though; A plan began to bring Kagome down formed in her mind. began should go after down & it should probably be began to form.
Nuuuu shes so mean :(
Asdf (Chapter 3) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
This story is very interesting, hope you continue:)
...eh? :sighs: Poor Kagome... I hope not everyone is like Kagura...
Hn? Why?! :'(
Calypso (Chapter 3) - Fri 06 Apr 2012
Ooh I can't wait to see how this story progresses. You have me intrigued.
Kayelyn (Chapter 3) - Fri 06 Apr 2012
Awwww! Poor Kagome. I'm not sure if she is blind to the situation or Kagura is really good at hiding her dislike, but either way it's looking like there will be hilariously awkward situations.
More, please?
Til next time, Lovely
Uhhhh oh! Watch out Kagome! She's eviiiiiiillllllll.
Ha, I love the title of this chapter and your summary has me intrigued. :) I am looking forward to the story.
-E.C.
HAH! SCOOOORE FOR THEIA!! x) lol. And for you, of course, for a wonderful start to what I'm sure will be a wonderful story. xP
Looking forward to future updates. The summary sounds very promising. ( ;
So mean, Kagura! You didn't even get to know her! :(
Luna (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Apr 2012
Can't wait for more!!
Ah, im sure she will have lots of fun :)
EEEEEEEE! I'm so excited :3!!!!
Yay for us and our new drabbles!
-MissKatt
PS: Nice title :3
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